CRIPPLED BIRD by adelja

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· @adelja ·
$4.85
CRIPPLED BIRD
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My crippled bird
From cold spring rains
I know how hard this is for you
To keep the wings in the shower.

Break them about skyscrapers
Broken grey cities
Grab the last notes
And looking for the immortal sense.

And again become wingless,
Losing their own path...
And the wings, big wings! -
What are they heavy!
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@wallsnow ·
Nice poem!
I have upvoted your post, can you upvote my post,thanks.
https://steemit.com/money/@wallsnow/introducing-randowhale-get-whale-power-by-sending-steem-stemm-dollar
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@miltos ·
$0.33
hello nice post i like this bird !!!Can you follow me?
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@vm2904 · (edited)
Adelja - I really liked the bit about broken grey cities and the concept of grabbing the last notes, searching for the immortal sense in them.   Conveys the sense that we all need to look back upon the grey, crumbling world around us and find the immortal sense to keep flying on !    Would love to see more of your work.  Am following you.  Please feel free to follow me if you would like to see some wildlife pics with an interesting twist such as https://steemit.com/wildlife/@vm2904/house-of-bones-every-jackal-for-himself and share your views on them
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