I'm sorry... by adelja

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· @adelja ·
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I'm sorry...
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Sorry for the truth of the expression of the eyes,
That sharp pain in my heart bore,
Sorry for the gloom of sleepless nights,
Feeling that in his heart arose.

Forgive the naivete expressed by words
And trembling hands that asked for affection,
I'm sorry for what just failed
For them to create the petition of the tale.

Sorry desire vast vision
The immensity of height and mystery
I'm sorry, and would not, we believe,
Fly to the sky, a heart of steel.

I'm sorry that all of you hid,
It seemed that nothing was looking for
I'm sorry, I differently knew,
I understand you did not want.

Sorry, I just wanted to be with you,
Freed from all earthly burden,
I'm sorry, and I understand: only love
The creak of the mysterious Union.

And another, sorry, I do not need
Even lose, and I will not regret,
The blessing also gives the sky
And God. And the rest is deception.

Sorry, I can't heart to cheat,
Your soul is far away, not with me
And not given to you to hear me,
While you and I became alive.
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@tamim ·
hahaha, I was looking to see if you wrote a new poem and there it was right in front of me. This is nice.
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@adelja ·
Hope You like it.
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@tamim ·
I do. Your writing style is very unique. I am not sure if it is because English is not your first language, or you choose to write in this specific way.
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@tamim ·
I am trying to figure out what logic your are using to write your poems. One thing I feel is that you are in tremendous pain. These poems are crying out "please hear my pain, I am silent, but my poems are doing the talking."
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@adelja ·
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The loneliness and pain of the soul.
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@tamim ·
Yes, I can feel that from your poetry. 

Keep writing. Your pain has a voice now. Don't stop. :)
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@tamim ·
I am not sure if you know of the steem chatroom?!

https://steemit.chat/channel/general

I just found out about it.
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