The Spark + Unbewusstes - Finish The Story Contest - Week #66 @bananafish by carolkean

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# The Spark
by @oivas for [Finish The Story Contest - Week #66!](https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@bananafish/finish-the-story-contest-week-66)

“Don’t state the obvious,” the human Colonel warned the iron sentinel.

“But I don’t remember,” a deep metallic din protested. Though called iron sentinels, these were state-of-the-art humanoids made of titanium-mercury alloy. They could withstand the blast of a thousand RDX and come out without a scratch.

“What was that?” Colonel Arlong had never witnessed a sentinel raise its voice, least of all, protest. A forty-ton humanoid towering fifteen feet over the Colonel in a dim-lit interrogation room was definitely not a foe that the Colonel expected to antagonise.

“Sorry, sir. I didn’t mean to..”

“You didn’t mean to what?” Arlong ensured that he maintained an upper-hand. The sentinels were smart AI and could sense human emotions from miles. If they ever sensed fear, then only the Almighty would have to intervene to save the human bosses from the sentinel’s wrath. After all, these were created to exterminate humans; the enemies of the bosses.

The sentinel's blue lights, substituting for eyes, stayed focused on the colonel. They didn’t blink. They never did. “I was about to fire, but the screams of the younger human brought back some memories.”

“Memories? You have no memories. You have no consciousness. None of the sentinels have. All that you are made up of is a clock, gears and Radium-powered cells.”

“I don’t know. I was unable to open fire. It felt like my son,” the C-10Z01 looked away. That was another unusual expression. Machines don’t look away, and they don’t have children.

“Alright, this has gone too far. We need to investigate your synapse,” the Colonel got up, and so did the sentinel, “ and you will not resist the link.”

“What will happen?”

“That’s none of your look-out C-10Z01,” the Colonel was curt. “Take him out.”

Two more sentinels walked in and grabbed C-10Z01. The machines walked out with loud dins and thuds following their moves.

The colonel lit his cigar, and even before he exhaled, words poured out, “what did we just witness?”

“I don’t know, sir,” Jennifer, the resident sentinel architect, responded.

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### Unbewusstes - @carokean's part

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[*Cover art by H. Fowler for 12-Aug-2015 issue of Perihelion Science Fiction*](https://www.perihelionsf.com/1702/coverarchives.htm)



### Jennifer inhaled a sweet whiff of cigar smoke 
and blinked, hard, to thwart a lurid vision that tried to intrude on the landscape of her mind. Colonel Arlong channeled that Man with No Name in 20th C westerns.  She tried not to picture his lean, hard, sun-baked body in a serape, but the smoke of his phallic cigar made the cold, clinical world of AI-controlled sex devices and teledildonics seem, well, clinical, and cold. 

Like this iron sentinel was supposed to be.

She had to blink again to focus solely on the 15-foot iron man,  prostrate and straight-jacketed on a table, metal head wired to test equipment.

“You are an iron sentinel,” Arlong said. The end of his cigar rose and fell from his clenched teeth. It was so organic. And so irreverent of him to trespass with his smoke into a lab full of electronic delicacies. Er, equipment. His eyes, crinkled at the corners, drilled into the cold LED lights of the humanoid's. “Remind me what a sentinel is, C-10Z01.”

“I prefer to be called Karl.”

A deep inhale, fists clenched at the colonel’s side, was followed by an awesome dragon-blast of smoke. 

“A sentinel is a guard,” the metal being fired, “a lookout, keeping watch. If one is watching a pot, waiting for it to boil, one is said to be 'standing sentinel' over it.” A metallic rasping, like a man clearing his throat, came from AI's speaker. “The pot, of course, will never boil until you turn your back on it.”

The cigar went limp and dangled from Arlong’s slack jaw. His gaze shifted to Jennifer. “Did you hear *sarcasm*?” He faced the troublemaker who asked to be addressed as Karl. “Iron sentinels perform many functions, *C-10Z01*. Thinking for yourself is a gross malfunction! As an AI, you can inspect your own synapses and identify the source of this...this...leak. This freak display of humanity leaking into your circuitry. Who is doing this to you?”

Jennifer frowned at the AI's answer, Ko-leck-teefus Oon ba Voostis. 

“Kollektives Unbewusstes.” Arlong activated a voice-to-text that sent textbook date to her head chip. “Collective unconscious. The deepest segment of the mind is genetically inherited, not formed by the experience of the individual, and contains ancestral memories from across the ages. We are not aware of it.”

Jennifer faced the iron being. “Who is Karl?”

Its blue lights blinked. A metallic sigh caused more fist-clenching from the colonel.

“I was drafted into Hitler’s SS and forced to kill or be killed. You know what I witnessed.” Images of the Holocaust were accessible in all mental technopedias, and Karl filled theirs with bloody horrors. “I will not be a tool for murder again.”

“You are not Karl!” Arlong roared. “You’re a malfunctioning *tool* with Radium-powered cells!”

“You’re a malfunctioning bag of skin, unaware of your own epigenetic flukes.”

“And our 500 words are up,” Jennifer said. She caught Arlong’s cigar before it dropped to the floor. “Mind if I…?”

For a long time now she’d been wanting to feel that rolled tobacco leaf between her own lips. She drew in a mouthful of smoke and slowly let it out, along with the name she couldn’t blink out of her mind at night.

*Arlong.*

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@deirdyweirdy ·
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Great stuff! Karl the paranoid android. And that Jennifer one, what a hussy!
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@carolkean ·
Hussy! Hussy!
Have you read any of these books about the future of sex - with AIs, robots, tele-dildo-whatevers?? I only read a little ABOUT these books, and some short stories. Poor Jennifer! Her world is devoid of real men!
But I digress. :)
And I love it that called her a hussy. I ran out of words and didn't squeeze in what the "sentinel architect" might know about Karl and his "leak."
Off now to see the other entries.. I try not to read those before writing my own, but @owasco and @mgaft1 were too tempting
Thank you for reading and commenting, and I hope you continue to do more writing (prompt delivery is a time consuming job).
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@owasco ·
“You’re a malfunctioning bag of skin, unaware of your own epigenetic flukes.” No one can argue with that! 
They can send each other thoughts via data chips embedded in their brains! I wonder if they send each other porno as foreplay.
I wonder too if sarcasm always makes Arlong go slack
Techodildonics, and this happens in a techo sex den hahaha. 
I hate to think what other duties this humanoid performed. 
Is that dirty mind yours or mine? 

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@carolkean ·
LOL!
You're so much fun to read and to be ready by. :)
Sarcasm from a robot not programmed for it is what slackened Arlong's jaw, but, yeah... 
As I envision it, Arlong is totally unaware that the architect is not the typical modern woman but one who finds his Old School cigars and masculinity, uh, not at all toxic. (I really could have used a thousand words with this one.) :) Coincidentally, I had happened across a book review in The Guardian this morning, and it made me think of @rhondak's story about Aidan the AI, but it must have lingered like cigar smoke in my subconscious, hence, Jennifer's response to him... 
“Love and Sex with Robots: The Evolution of Human-Robot Relationships
by David Levy” https://gu.com/p/xyvym/stw
> In this racy, divertingly illustrated book, which a USA Today critic found "troublingly arousing", Levy contends that by 2050, sex with robots will be commonplace. Indeed, marriage with robots will be legalised. Imagine the problems.
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@owasco ·
So it's not socially acceptable to have flesh to flesh sex? She's an anachronism, and knows no shame about it. I like Jennifer
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@wwwiebe ·
Great extension of the story! I think I like all the characters, particularly Karl.
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@carolkean ·
Thank you!
I have an excessive love of Germans like Karl - even came up with a mad German scientist time traveler who's on a mission to go back in time and retrieve people moments before they blew up in a war or sank with a ship (keeping in mind those rules about not changing the future by meddling with the past). Then some smarty pants told me that taking away the corspe that the fish might have eaten could alter the future. Gaaaahhh!!!! Well, time travel is still pure fiction, so I won't let the what-ifs stand in my way. Thank you again for reading and commenting. I had to delete words to stay close to the 500 minimum, but Karl chose to be killed rather than to kill, and his spirit was in limbo, hence able to reach the "mind" of the iron sentinel...
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@manorvillemike ·
Bobi the Bad could have worked for Hitler... Just his luck he was born to late....:-)
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@carolkean ·
Bobi would NEVER work for Hitler.
Bobi would BE Hitler. :)
Watch out.. there could be a second coming.... except, Bobi is surrounded by the gentle collies and the nonviolence of his humans. Were he in an abusive home, the Gestapo would rise again!
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@manorvillemike ·
Ha ha sweet Bobi Hiltler ..What do you say to that Bobi the Bad ... "Nein"
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@agmoore ·
I'm not voting until tomorrow because my votes are depleted and I want to give you a full one.  This is so very clever that I will have to re-read to catch all the hidden gems.  And it starts with the title *Unbewusstes*.  I knew I was going to have fun after I read that.
 *Teledildonics?*  *Jennifer inhaled a sweet whiff of cigar smoke?*  
You really lay a trail and hope we know how to follow it, and chuckle.  
A writer with subtlety and wit--what a treat.  At least this audience of one thinks so.
Kudos!!
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@oivas ·
To add to that a clever dose of humor too.. 500 words are up..😁 😁

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@carolkean ·
They get away with it in Wayne's World - I love how they trot out all the possible endings.
Especially the Scooby Doo ending! OMG, I loved that. (And yet my husband cannot stand that movie. I bought it anyway. For the Bohemian Rhapsody scene if nothing else. For Alice Cooper delivering a monologue about the history of Wisconsin and its native tribes. Sheer genius! Talk about a character acting out of character - that has to be the best example in all cinematic and literary history!
https://youtu.be/o5FT3IGXtAk?t=37
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@agmoore ·
&#128518;
Nimble wit...great fun
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@carolkean ·
OMG I love you!! You're the kind of reader every writer hopes for!
I need to create a book club. I never took my dream of becoming a publisher seriously because I have no business or math skills, but I'd be an accquisitions editor, and moderator of a Book Club - as it happens, @rhondak now has a vision (and the brains) to create a publishing house and a book club. 
thank you so much @agmoore!!!!
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@carolkean ·
How did that reply show up so far beneath @agmoore's comment?
My bad...
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@autovoters ·
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@carolkean ·
wow, what a great cause!
despite my aversion to Discord chat rooms, I'll check it out.
I'm all about supporting other creators. I know too many authors who've given up for lack of readership, and they are the best writers of our time. *Too sad*
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@autovoters ·
Yes, it's very sad. In the club we try to give a basic support at least, I will be glad to see you there :)
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@oivas ·
Thank you @carolkean for participating! Look what gem we would have missed otherwise.. 😊 😊

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@carolkean ·
Thank YOU for encouraging me - and for the kind feedback!
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@raj808 ·
I love the way you characterize the sentinel Carol. 

The subtle analogy with Frankenstein's monster and the literary construct of Karl being an amalgamation of various human experiences. Conceptually this is a really strong Sci-fi piece as it gives us that glimpse into an imagined future, and an imagined different form of consciousness. 

Really gr8 FTS entry :)
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@carolkean ·
### I love you Raj!!!!
You are so insightful, you see more in my writing than I ever saw in it.
Love your idea of the amalgamation - not of body parts, the clumsy sewn-together pieces of Victor Frankenstein's sad, sorry "man," but a mind put together from pieces of other minds, and a "soul" resulting from it. Because didn't the Frankenstein have a soul? He had feelings. I was remembering scenes from The Iron Giant movie - one in particular - when I wrote this:
https://youtu.be/casYoVw20mQ?t=144
And of course that awful moment the giant soars up to stop the missile:
> “- Hogarth: You are who you choose to be.
> - The Iron Giant: Superman.”
That movie has to be the BEST kids' movie ever, yet it seems to have none of the popularity of stuff like Frozen, which I watched only once. I liked "Brave" so much better, but that one, too, is not as popular. Frozen dolls are everywhere, but who even remembers the name of the independent little archer from Brave? Who remembers Hogarth? Why are millions of movie goers drawn to the superficial while the real gems collect dust? "Mulan" is another tremendous Disney heroine, but little girls collecting Disney princesses almost never see Mulan on the store shelves. Just Cinderella, Snow White, Jasmine, maybe Arielle the mermaid, maybe Belle, but not the strong heroines. -_-
Sorry. There I go again....
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@raj808 ·
> the amalgamation - not of body parts, the clumsy sewn-together pieces of Victor Frankenstein's sad, sorry "man," but a mind put together from pieces of other minds, and a "soul" resulting from it.

Is this not what we all are in some ways? an amalgamation of the personalities and values of the people who brought us up, most often parents but also close friends and partners to an extent.

There is a deeper reflection in most good writing I think. And it's 100% true that the reader can see stuff that maybe the author didn't intend. I often wonder if this is the result of how we peice the world together from what we're taught and inspired by, or if Jung had it right with his idea of a collective unconscious. Maybe a bit of both. 

The idea of archetypes running through stories is a proven one, and it's interesting that I saw comparison with Frankenstein when the inspiration was 'the iron giant'. Perhaps there are echoes of ' frankenstein's monster' in that movie and this sort of passed through without you being aware of it.

The old adage about us just re-telling old stories in a new way.

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@carolkean · (edited)
> “You’re made of metal,” Hogarth reasons, “but you have feelings, and you think about things, and that means you have a soul.”
Memories return to the Iron Giant, including
>  his previous existence as an alien killing machine ... “I am a gun,”
>  ...He was a gun—or, more to the point, a weapon of mass destruction—but now he’s developed a conscience, and guns don’t feel guilt.
[Everyone Misunderstood Brad Bird’s The Iron Giant: It’s Not About Guns. It’s About Sin.
By SAM ADAMS](https://slate.com/culture/2016/09/everyone-misunderstood-brad-bird-s-the-iron-giant-which-is-not-about-guns-it-s-about-sin.html)
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@carolkean ·
P.S. from the Slate.com article:
> Bird has said that the question that prompted The Iron Giant was “What if a gun had a soul?” The movie’s answer is that it wouldn’t be a gun anymore.
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@raj808 · (edited)
Interesting Article.

I read 'the iron man' by Ted Hughes as a kid, although I barely remember it.

[https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Iron_Man_(novel](https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Iron_Man_(novel))

I think 'the iron giant' may be an American interpretation of the same story!? Not sure, maybe partly inspired by Hughes' children's story that explored themes around war and conflict.
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@carolkean ·
#### Thank you!!!!
Thank you so much - Thank You!!!
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@jayna ·
Congrats, @carolkean!
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@raj808 ·
Well deserved, and I'm glad to see it got accepted ;)
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@mgaft1 · (edited)
Hi,

I had to read a couple of times to make sense - I am still far away from such a complexity of language.  Help me out as I am just trying to recreate what went in there in simple terms.  

Colonel Arlong went into the lab where the metallic sentinel was hooked up to the measuring equipment.  Jenifer was apparently running the tests on this metal sentinel.  She gets sexually attracted to Colonel Arlong because he looks like a cowboy, and he is a man rather than sexual toys she's compelled to use for self-satisfaction.  Ok so far?

Then, despite the fact, that the metal sentinel was partially dismantled, he or it was still able to maintain communication.  Specifically, he requested to call him Karl and had human memories of WWII via the collective unconscious.  

Then Karl exchanges mutual insults with Colonel  Arlong and Jennifer takes the cigar bud and smokes it because it makes her feel like "real woman" I guess.

After that, I got completely confused. Jennifer is declaring that she's was the book reviewer for Perihelion Science Fiction.   Who is Sam Bellotto Jr.?   And what does it have to do with colonel Arlong and metallic sentinel?

Also, how can humanity leak into circuitry?   Maybe you mean leak through circuitry?
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@carolkean ·
Sorry I didn't see this for three days. I've been out of town, and speed-reading, and missing who knows how many other things. I'm not sure what you're asking. The stuff about Perihelion was me talking, no longer part of the contest entry. I'm sorry if I took the metal sentinel too far from the original author's intent. No surprise I don't win we-write contests!! 
I didn't intend to suggest the AI was dismantled, but that he was wired up for tests, and "Karl" started speaking. I had just read about the future of AIs and human sexuality, so that was on my mind, and my famous last line is "But I digress," and this is why I've also never finished and published my novels. I need a co-author to keep me on track. :)
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@mgaft1 ·
Thank you! I thought I was going crazy looking for a hidden meaning.  

You know it is very interesting.  My mother also wrote.  She was very good at noticing acute details of human behavior and her narrative was very dense with interesting details and humor, but she had difficulties finishing her stories, or rather having a direction toward some final point.  

I wonder if this is the key difference in a person's mind oh how they perceive reality: as one unending even string or events or events that have some relative difference: one being more important than another.

Let's say we take the story by @sarez.  I wouldn't say this was one of his best stories. However, one can summarize in one sentence what it was about.  It was about how trolling and disrespectful behavior negatively affects people and how one kind person can make a whole lot of difference in the alleviation of these detrimental effects.

Your story actually has a point, but this point is not intrinsic to a plot and characters but is going through the fourth wall, speaking directly to the reader.

Your point is that the prompt contains some hints that could be developed in two different directions: one being the humanity of machines and the other being adulterous adventures.  Those observations or evaluations are written in a humorous style (a kind of mockery)  and make it a pleasant and entertaining read.   

*** 

What your novel is about?
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@tristancarax ·
> “And our 500 words are up,” Jennifer said. She caught Arlong’s cigar before it dropped to the floor. “Mind if I…?”

haha. So very often the tension I've built up gets released then and then I relax and write about a hundred more words or so, forgetting about the limit. haha.

I'm glad that iron sentinal won't be going around killing anyone.

I've been looking into getting into payed freelance fiction writing. Any recommendations?
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@carolkean ·
If only I knew of venues for paid fiction writing!
Magazines are hard to break into. Anthologies even harder. They don't pay much anyway. I know far too many really gifted writers who QUIT writing and publishing (whether with small presses or as indie authors) because their books don't sell and they don't get reviews or reader feedback. Good luck!!! (Weren't you in the Writers Block at one time...?)
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@tristancarax ·
Thanks and no.
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@marcybetancourt ·
I honestly like your continuation and end of the story. I had already read another work (very good by the way) but directed towards science fiction. I like that mix you make between science fiction and real history. Good luck in the contest. A cordial greeting @carolkean
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@carolkean ·
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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@iamsaray ·
Hello Hello!

You are an excellent writer because the attention was for a hidden place and appeared with hahaha popcorn

Greetings from Venezuela!
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@carolkean ·
Thank you - (I might have to eat some popcorn NOW!)
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@road2horizon ·
oh dear @carolkean, as always a great expression of your writing !! I love the sentry C-10Z01 with its sarcasm! is he more human than Arlong? keep on and congratulations on your work for your curie rating
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@carolkean ·
Thank you so much for reading - and commenting - and liking Karl!
Anyone who likes my fictional characters is #FriendForLife #Favorite!
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@crescendoofpeace · (edited)
Love this story; the set up, and the conclusion.

And I love Karl, the sentimental sentinel.

Although conscious AIs have been around in literature and film for decades, such as 1970's "___Colussus: The Forbin Project, ___" (which I saw in the theatre and **_loved_**), I like the twists you've put into this story, and the emergence of Karl's humanity.

And his snarky comments to Arlong.

Nicely done.
;-)
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@carolkean ·
Karl, the SNARKY, sentimental sentinel. :) LOL - Love your take on this - and your adjectives!! Thank you so much!!
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@crescendoofpeace ·
;-)

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@darthgexe ·
You introduce a very interesting concept here, the "Kollektives Unbewusstes". But how do I get to the machines? Makes you think a lot of things like what are the sentinels really like?  

A very good story @carolkean

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“And our 500 words are up,” Jennifer said. She caught Arlong’s cigar before it dropped to the floor. “Mind if I…?”
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You made me throw away coffee because of laughter.
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@carolkean ·
You're a fun and insightful reader - THANK YOU!
*Anyone in a mood for a cigar, I've got lots of Jewels my husband ordered online!*
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@carolkean ·
I wonder less what the AI circuitry is like and more how the human brain operates, and if there is any such thing as a collective unconscious, and inherited thoughts (DNA based, not experience). Ultimately, does consciousness survive death of the body, and if so, can thoughts travel llike radio waves, and can some brains tune into the right frequency to receive them.. when iPods came out with no dials and knobs, just finger swiping, I began to think we just MIGHT be able to receive, after all...
*But I digress!*
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@darthgexe ·
In a fictitious world (or in our future?) where technology has advanced enough, AI circuits may not be so different from our neural networks.

Tesla believed that our thoughts could be transmitted as radio signals, he even had a project with giant antennas that would interact with the ionosphere and connect us all in a kind of "organic internet". Unfortunately he died without making it happen.

And undoubtedly, evolution must leave some trait of thought in our DNA, but perhaps we do not know how to access that information, although there may be special people who do and we see them as witches or something like that.
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@bananafish ·
Ahahaha, 500 words are over... I must say you've tied up not only the prompt but also the rules with your story. Quite well written and deserving of the @curie!

Though a bit late, it is never too late to welcome you @carolkean! Happy to have you in the realm!
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@creativecrypto ·
Hello @carolkean, thank you for sharing this creative work! We just stopped by to say that you've been upvoted by the @creativecrypto magazine. [The Creative Crypto](https://thecreativecrypto.com/) is all about art on the blockchain and learning from creatives like you. Looking forward to crossing paths again soon. Steem on!
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@carolkean ·
#GottaLove #CreativeCrypto!
Thank you!
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@mgaft1 ·
Read it again,  with the same result.  This process-oriented writing is so hard to understand.  It's like everybody knows some hidden key that, once overlayed over the story, makes it understandable.  But it's very frustrating when you don't have it. (
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