Four walls with steel bars wait (Original poetry) by corderosiete

poetry · @corderosiete · Nov 1 '18 (edited)

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Four walls with steel bars wait (Original poetry)

## <center> Four walls with steel bars wait </center>

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<center> ![nm.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQma8xzkBpLUFxgkbBZqXi7G8AMyXoXQSg4cJcFiyrLcTas/nm.jpg) </center>

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### <center> Four walls with steel bars wait </center>

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<center> He could have been a good leader,
But he preferred to be a dictator.
Only acclaimed by a fist of tongues.
It makes a nation suffer.
Young people do not see a fixed point,
Only four borders to forge a better future.

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They walk in unknown ways.

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The fist seeks to have more power.
Playing with the despair of the people.
Enrich yourself But what?
There is a page
in which everything is written.
Your future is bleak
confined to four walls
with steel bars. </center>

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<center> ![Celda-380x253.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmVbhhBje6f2qCybfV8PgfDc2ZvEXaTSu5QfPV8vxnAZ8N/Celda-380x253.jpg) </center>

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<center> Image [1](http://notitotal.com/2016/09/22/diaspora-venezolana-documental-muestra-la-realidad-los-jovenes-emigran/)  [2](https://definicion.mx/celda/) </center>

#### <center>  Original by @corderosiete

11/01/2018  </center>

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@momzillanc · Nov 2 '18

A pointed and tragic commentary in your erudite poem.

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@corderosiete · Nov 4 '18

Thanks @momzillanc, justice is slow, but it arrives. I hope to see him pay for so much pain caused to millions of us. In this month, my children leave the country with the illusion of living without fear and for a better future. I am alone. Selling what little I have so they can leave.

👍 momzillanc

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@momzillanc · Nov 4 '18

I wish the much luck and hope you may join them soon.

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