RE: Translating Quasar Framework Documentation To Arabic #6 by dr-frankenstein

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Most of the translation is accurate. We can understand from the language and level of difficulty used in this project, that this document is really meant for a lambda user, nonetheless, there are in there, and as always, a few terms that do not exist in Arabic, or simply because there are no targets for them e.g. trying to find the proper word for a website that is not available in Arabic, such as ‘GitHub’. This shows us that a proper documentation/research is always needed to present a good contribution, which you did to find the definition of some concepts.  That being said, there are a few issues that I already mentioned in your last contribution, one of them is the use of (ذالك) instead of (ذلك) and some other minor issues such as using (ملاحضة) instead of (ملاحظة). Try to be consistent, in the first contribution, you did choose to use the source word (signed-off-by), but in the later strings, the concept was translated into Arabic.  It is always a good practice to note down this information, because it is sometimes difficult for a person to get rid of his old habits, and the best way to remember those micro corrections is to note/write them down. I also suggested some reformulations that you can check directly on Crowdin.

As for the presentation, there is a clear improvement, but still, more information is needed, especially if we take into consideration many interesting subjects that you tackled in this contribution, you cited some of them in your presentation, it would have been great if you formulated a little more about the different entries. Try to enhance/perfect your future presentation to be more engaging, aesthetically and intellectually, I am sure that we will all benefit from it.


Thank you for your contribution @samhamou
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