![The_Magician_Page_16.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/DQmTVwk7XLUsR1Ub1te3mJdd66zrmYYux96DaEMEgp5iKK6/The_Magician_Page_16.jpg) I often feel uncomfortable trying to switch scenes mid page, but here I think I manage to do so by hiding the shift behind a joke. Harvey notices Mookie's awful parking job and remarks that that man must be an asshole - cut to Mookie drinking and laughing. It's not laugh out loud funny, but it makes me smirk, and most importantly it moves me back to where I want to be in the story. Transitions are hard man, I've been talking about them a lot this week...probably because I took too long a break from writing and now issue 5 has been a struggle to break back into. I had an amazing idea on how to start the issue off while I was writing on a train, because for some reason movement often helps me come to random epiphanies. Issue 5 will start from the perspective of Rupert Saxton, and since he's a 4th dimensional being the past, present, future, and some alternate timelines are all just a jumble of memories to him. I had some crazy ideas for the panel layout, and I hope that when eventually Theresa and I get to that part she will be excited at the challenge, and not super pissed at me... After that initial idea, I've slowed down. I have this internal pressure where I feel like I can't condense time, that I need to show all the events as they logically unfold. It really annoys me when I can't get past this mental block, because we don't need to: -watch someone get hurt - have them react to getting hurt -call for help -get help, etc. Maybe I need to stop writing towards the end of the day when I'm tired, I bet our shitty habits are harder to resist when our brain has checked out. ![The_Magician_Page_16.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/DQmfJTgiHmBT1aipQ4KFnNJPJqBtppwmvAKB8LH4kTkFWEu/The_Magician_Page_16.jpg) Theresa Chiechi's (The Artist @la-fumettista) website is here: http://www.theresachiechi.com/ Sign up for updates on our website: https://www.ithaqacomic.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/pg/IthaqaComic/about/?ref=page_internal Twitter: @IthaqaComic Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/ithaqacomic/
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I feel the same! Transitions between scenes can be really complex to do... I always get worried if the reader will understand, sometimes I show the pages to some friends and ask if they got it, to make sure people won't get lost while reading my comics... By the way, your art style is great, love the way you draw the people expressions :)
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Thanks! I'm the writer and @la-fumettista is the artist! What are some strategies you use for transitioning scenes :)
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