<sup>[Click here for English photo-only version](https://steemit.com/photography/@fotosdenada/playing-with-kiwi-original-photography)</sup> Muy buenas, Para una clase de escritura, nos dieron una tarea interesante. Tuvimos que escribir algo corto del punto de vista de un kiwi. Esto es lo que entregué yo. <center> ![MM201820180914-EOS_6989.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmdAWrRYETjAc2Cc4Ko3PrXxkDTsurYiKsCF99SWxxBbqY/MM201820180914-EOS_6989.jpg)[<sup>Kiwi cortado</sup>](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmdAWrRYETjAc2Cc4Ko3PrXxkDTsurYiKsCF99SWxxBbqY/MM201820180914-EOS_6989.jpg) </center> ### <center> La Transformación </center> ### Por unos dedos y un brazo cortito, perdí mi asiento y la esperanza. Resbaldé entre mis primos kiwi y llegué al olvido. Esperando. Sólo quería alimentar; que me incorpore en una ensalada o que mis enzimas ablanden la ternera. Soñaba con la gloria de aparecer en un plato de restaurante, cortado para enseñar las semillas negras y corazón blanco que tengo. Ya no. Bajo el estante, ya empiezo a pudrirme. Sale mi sangre fétida al suelo, la podredumbre de mi carne expulsando un hedor repugnante. Los clientes ¡ya se darán cuenta! También las moscas. Las enzimas que las repelaban ya no las quitan. Sigue mi transformación de verde a marrón a blanco peludo Ya negro, seco. El tufo, mi venganza. <center> ![MM201820180914-EOS_7013.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmUToZDZC1zcA3DU8gih5whrWuqingVFTzE3uzwkdLvYkT/MM201820180914-EOS_7013.jpg)[<sup>Rebanada de kiwi con luz del fondo</sup>](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmUToZDZC1zcA3DU8gih5whrWuqingVFTzE3uzwkdLvYkT/MM201820180914-EOS_7013.jpg) </center> Gracias por dar un vistazo. No soy poeta y cualquier consejo que me ofrezcan se lo agradecería mucho. Se te haya gustado mi trabajo (fotos o escritura) no se olvide de votarlo. <div class="pull-left"> ¡Saludos! ## @fotosdenada </div> <div class="pull-right"> ![tag.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/DQmXT19exBoHqyg3xcmFR7zcfn4Yqno77MfYk88tFhenuYL/tag.jpg) </div> ![MM201820180914-EOS_6988.jpg](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmTXMS2uvFhR2tBYKDkBLbohBF4k2cYqc2zvtfyofeoPHf/MM201820180914-EOS_6988.jpg)
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Yo tampoco soy poeta pero me gusto mucho la creatividad, exitos! :D
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Gracias. Pues a ver qué nota recibe.
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<div class="text-justify">Bastante interesante la historia y quién la narra. Qué creatividad ¡Excelente trabajo!</div> <br> <center><h1>Recibe nuestro voto por parte del equipo de curación data-usb</h1></center> <br> <center>https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmb49uMrsyjT59UY1wCFCh5z9rr2ejnWpLgoEV4EUDqxx8/MASCOTA%20DATA-USB%20COMPLETO.png</center> <br> <div class="text-justify">Puedes chequear nuestro reporte diario haciendo click <a href="https://steemit.com/spanish/@data-usb/reporte-de-curacion-69-fecha-16-09-2018">Aquí</a></div> <br> <div class="text-justify">Unete a nuestro servidor de discord para pertenecer a nuestra comunidad haciendo click <a href="https://discordapp.com/invite/zrYjfeF">Aquí</a></div>
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Gracias.
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muy bonito, suerte ;) ![Zwischenlinie-2 für Steem-Post 940x120.png](https://cdn.steemitimages.com/DQmW5fJjkyJzD5bD9kcgBYpvBVUhB4cK8vdb3iu2UWV9Lve/Zwischenlinie-2%20f%C3%BCr%20Steem-Post%20940x120.png) mit sonnigen Grüßen aus Andalusien<br> Don Thomas
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