Screening, a five minute freewrite. by fromage

freewrite · @fromage · Sep 13 '18

$2.54

Screening, a five minute freewrite.

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"I know you're ignoring me. I..."  Delete.

"Look, you have to get out of there.  They know, it's..."  Delete.

"You really gonna choose dead over a few more years with me?"  End of messages.

I rubbed my eyes. All I wanted to do was sleep. For a moment, silence. The phone buzzed.

"What do I have to do to get you to listen? You don't have time.  There are agents outside now.  If you don't activate your tumbler you are dead.  I know that you don't want to come back. I understand. I don't want to be stuck here any more than you do. They got eyes everywhere. They're watching me right now.  Just activate it."  End of messages.

I pulled up my hood and sank back, the tumbler lying in my lap.  I toyed with it, feeling the sphere's coolness as I worked my way towards its single button. The door burst open as I shut my eyes and hit it. 

I was turned inside out and jerked sideways, off the couch and out of the room, through the interspace and back to the white room. A loudspeaker crackled to life.

"Welcome back.  One year penalty for failure to complete mission. Five year penalty for failure to entertain. Total sentence now 457 years."  

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@corpsvalues · Sep 13 '18

Damn, that's some Death Race Enter Player One shit.  I expect a full screenplay shortly =p

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@fromage · Sep 13 '18 (edited)

Oof.  Already working on a novel, heh.  Back burner for sure though.

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@dollarsandsense · Sep 13 '18

Oh that’s pretty cool. Nice dose of imagination, well done. I can see the trailer now.

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@fromage · Sep 13 '18

I would be happy to direct one. Also, I'm sure I would be terrible at it.

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@scrawly · Sep 13 '18

Is this person really so boring that they accumulated 400+ years in punishment? XD &nbsp; 
&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 
I like it, it feels like it could be expanded into a few chapters at least :). &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 
&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;

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@fromage · Sep 13 '18

Well when all you do is sleep and watch TV the time can really pile up.

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@steemitbloggers · Sep 13 '18

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@fromage · Sep 13 '18

Thanks so much!

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@c-squared · Sep 15 '18

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@ykdesign · Sep 16 '18

your written skill are awesome...love your thinkng friend fromage, god bless you are your written skill.

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