Open Mic Songwriters Challenge Week #1 by geenaizzy

openmic · @geenaizzy · Nov 24 '17

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Open Mic Songwriters Challenge Week #1

# Open Mic Songwriters Challenge Week #1

## Hello my fellow Steemians,

This is my entry for week 1 of the open mic songwriters challenge 

The theme was 'Broken Mirror' 

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https://youtu.be/zpvrizbTsTA
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Big thanks to @luzcypher and @meno for making this happen.

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Here are the lyrics.


Fall Apart

Verse1
You smashed me like a broken mirror 
I fell apart in shards of glass
The more I think the more it's clearer
bound to fail right from the start

Verse2
I should have known you were a killer
Collecting hearts like a psychopath
chance for survival is getting slimmer
We love ourselves In the aftermath

Chorus
Lift me up and let me fall
Put me down I'm standing tall
Way past caring, Nothing at all
No-thing at all

Verse3
Now you're calling me the sinner
But we both know there's nothing wrong
In this game there is no winner
Broken hearts in a broken song

Chorus
Lift me up and let me fall
Put me down I'm standing tall
Way past caring, Nothing at all
No-thing at all

Lift me up I'm standing tall 
Put me down, let me fall
Way past caring, Nothing at all
No-thing at all

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Hope you like it

Until next time

Lots of Love

Geena

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@passion-ground · Nov 24 '17

Lovely entry, @geenaizzy!

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@luzcypher · Nov 24 '17

Nice song. Thanks for entering.

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@soykatonline · Nov 25 '17

So good! loved it! <3  how long did it take you to write it?

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@geenaizzy · Nov 26 '17

Thank you! How long? Hard to say a couple hours here and there but it came together pretty quickly, let's hope the rest of the challenge runs that well, too 😉

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@soykatonline · Nov 27 '17

yeah, i am thinking the same.. since i am not very good to come up with songs out of the blue... i have an emotional reason to do so..so, we'll see how it goes.
That's what i like about this  challenge ... it is pushing me a little... :)

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@g10a · Nov 26 '17

this song is so lovely wow!

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@basilmarples · Nov 26 '17

yesss! I love the way mirror, killer and sinner all rhyme. Was that on purpose? It really helps to cement the first line of each verse with a really familiar feeling. Lovely song :) x

👍 geenaizzy

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@geenaizzy · Nov 26 '17

Thank you so much for your kind words, the almost rhyme wasn't planned but when I thought about them it felt the right word to put there, if you know what I mean, my songwriting is very intuitive and I don't analyse too much when I write.

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@meno · Nov 27 '17

I hope you take this like a compliment, because its meant as one... your music always had that tender/dark element to it. It's hard to describe... 

loved your entry!

👍 geenaizzy

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@geenaizzy · Nov 28 '17

Thank you so much, yes I take it as a compliment, I'm having fun with a bit of morbidity but in real life I'm quite the happy person so maybe that's how I release my dark side ;)

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@hugo.exe · Nov 27 '17

beautiful! congrats

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@ausxen · Nov 28 '17

I love these lyrics!! By the way is that an ES-335 in the background?

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@geenaizzy · Nov 28 '17

Thank you! Oh man I wish it was a Gibson, I could only afford a cheap copy! But once I make it big here on Steemit (lol) I'm defs gonna get one! Listened to your new single by the way! Loved it!

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@lucybanks · Nov 28 '17

I really love your finger work on the guitar and for some reason, your voice is a massive comfort to me. My mum has a similar singing voice so it's really lovely to hear!

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@geenaizzy · Nov 29 '17

Thank you, coming from the girl that has such a goosebumps creating voice, that's a big compliment and  yeah haha, maybe that's just a mum voice! ;)

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@lucybanks · Nov 29 '17

Ahh that's so lovely of you!! Haha it's not just a mum voice, my mum is a wonderful singer like yourself. There's something very soothing and comforting about it so I will definitely be listening to all yours songs!

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