The cheater and the killer - A short story - Part 1 by giantbear

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The cheater and the killer - A short story - Part 1
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<p>John and Sarah were celebrating their twenty-fifth wedding anniversary. &nbsp;John had never been a very romantic person, but he knew he had to do something special this year. He messed up terribly the previous year and it was by God's grace that Sarah forgave him.&nbsp;</p>
<p>It all happened at the Christmas party last year. Mrs White his previous secretary had retired and he appointed a young super attractive girl named Luna. She was everything that any man could ever dream of. &nbsp;She was beautiful, with long black hair and the greenest emerald eyes he had ever seen. When she looked at you it felt as if she was looking into your soul. &nbsp;She had a very calming effect on him, and he didn't even think twice to appoint her. It turned out she was good at everything. &nbsp;</p>
<p>He worked late that evening and he asked Luna to stay and help out. He had no intentions with her but needless to say, the physical attraction overpowered them and she helped him out with so much more. They didn't get much work done, but the sex was amazing. &nbsp;</p>
<p>The next day Luna acted as if nothing had happened but he felt a guilt towards Sarah he had never felt before. It happened twice after and then Sarah caught them the last time. He told her he had to work late, and she decided to show up unannounced to bring him food. &nbsp;Sarah was devastated and wanted to leave him, but he begged and crawled on his knees until she forgave him.&nbsp;</p>
<p>He fired Luna on the spot and she just smiled when she packed up her stuff. &nbsp;It was kind of creepy but he was glad when she finally left the office. &nbsp;</p>
<p>It took months for Sarah to calm down and give him another chance. He was grateful and promised that he would never in his life cheat on her again. It took a long time for them to get to a good place again, and that is why he wanted to treat her like a queen on their anniversary. &nbsp;</p>
<p>He searched for days and then booked a nine day cast away holiday on a remote island in Siroktabe Indonesia. It would be the perfect getaway. &nbsp;It will be only them and they would have the chance to rekindle their love. He still had a lot of planning to do, but he was sure that Sarah would be excited if she knew what the was planning. He couldn't wait to get all his plans together and then tell Sarah the good news. &nbsp;</p>
<p><strong>- To be continued-&nbsp;</strong></p>
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@len.george ·
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