SWEET SADNESS, MY SOUL (An Original Poetry ➕ Analysis, Notes & Literary Appreciations) by josediccus

poetry · @josediccus · Jul 13 '18

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SWEET SADNESS, MY SOUL (An Original Poetry ➕ Analysis, Notes & Literary Appreciations)

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###### [Image pixabay](https://pixabay.com/en/gothic-fantasy-dark-dark-angel-1629448/)

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**Kill the ballad, ignite the hyssop,
the tree burns in turns, choking in hiccups 
I'm a citizen of misery,
swimming in the waters of agony,
resume the tragedy,
let's play a rhythm with heavy symphony.
sweet sadness engulfed my soul,
like ambient spirits, now I smile a mournful** smile.

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**The sunset is dirty with clouds,
filling the thoughts with paralysed ideas,
to stay in the warm tethers of the railway tracks,
and listen to my last tracks,
heading for ballistics impunity,
yet smiling, contorted in pain
Sweet sadness fill the emptiness of my soul.**

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**There's a road to fatal expiration,
lying in the beautiful Savannah.
The oasis quench thirst with tears,
but the urge to weep is prettier than the will to fly,
you're in a cage, ignited by musing,
a tainted reveries, like the hued evenings,
yet the sweet of affliction
Is like warm bread to the mouth.**
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**Write me an eulogy,
the world is a talented bard,
Of memories when I was a budding,
tipped to blossom and bloom,
but the tornadoes and volcanoes have come,
turning dreams to char,
tender petals to floral murder,
Sweetness sadness, feels the aches in my soul.**


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### POETIC NOTES, ANALYSIS & LITERARY APPRECIATION



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When an object of light presumably human  is subjected to darkness for a long period of time, the best instinct of survival to showcase is adaptability. The poem is a piece on the process of adaptability to one's sorrow or pain . The genesis of agony in most cases often spark on part of life which memories collide and bring tears to the eyes, but in certain cases man is an personality, coined from past experiences.

The poet uses oxymoron in the poem title to narrate the how it's possible to attract the positive, along side the negative as well as this is a common feature of existences.

The poem portrays how's the poet got habitual with how it feels to be hurt and unhappy to the extent that it seems to no longer hurt. The poem here took his problems and conveyed them as a normal routine of life, and in stanza 3 painted death as a very regular occurrence which of course he initiated by going to the railway track and listening to a song for one last time. His use of euphemism hid the extent because he feels even death itself seems to be nothing more than another life

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#### Written, edited & analysed
### By @Josediccus
#### 13/7/2018


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 "Steemian Mantra" 


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###### Visit my blog for more amazing poems


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**JOSEPH C.IKECHUKWU**


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@dante31 · Jul 13 '18

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Sometimes a routine can be boring, swwet and melancholy 

> you're in a cage, ignited by musing,
a tainted reveries, like the hued evenings

Awesome buddy, your imaginary is exquisite. 

`Dante is Here No fear `

Cheers

👍 josediccus

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@josediccus · Jul 13 '18

Well you flatter me man. 😀😀  well my most strongest abilities are using imageries to paint tendencies, happenings, man and nature philosophy. 
Thank you so much @Dante31

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@wafrica · Jul 13 '18

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👍 josediccus

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@sunnylife · Jul 13 '18

$0.02

How to be you? so talented.
Have a great day my broda.

👍 josediccus

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@josediccus · Jul 13 '18

Thank you so much @sunnylife, you're just too talented as well 😀😀😀

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@luciannagy · Jul 13 '18

Have you ever thought to recite your poetry upon contemporary music such as a modern jazz composition? Maybe we'll collaborate at some moment :-) Modern/Abstract music composed with your lyrics are a new Renaissance Era ... in mmy humble opinion

Keep in touch @josediccus

Blessings

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