Let Me Tell You About this Elder (a 5o-Word Story for @jayna) by marlyncabrera

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Let Me Tell You About this Elder (a 5o-Word Story for @jayna)
## Hi, fifty-worders and readers.
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This is my debut into @jayna's #fiftywords contest. I’ll do my best to follow the work of others, upvote and comment, as I understand this is about community building.

The prompt for this week is “shade.” I’ve chosen the shade under an elder, motivated by ancient legends of infernal fire coming from its wood.

<center>**I hope you can read my entry, and hopefully, you’ll leave a comment.**</center>
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Here I go.
### <center>**˚º○○º ˚º○○º ˚º○○º ˚º○○º ˚º○○º ˚º○○º ˚º○○º ˚º○○º ˚º○○º**</center>
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https://cdn.pixabay.com/photo/2014/08/31/19/06/elder-432328_960_720.jpg

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### <center>Let Me Tell You About this Elder</center>
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The remains of a bonfire looked indecipherably old. He’d come find her at the labyrinth's mouth, licentious date—teenage Valentine—. Unseen until nighttime, vigilant devil’s eyes grew among the elder’s purple-black berries. Again, a child was conceived in the shade; he’d be born, but none was ever to leave.
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### <center>https://i.imgur.com/QtkN0S5.png?1</center>

#### <center>Do you want to participate?
### Click [here](https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@jayna/new50-wordstorypromptplusanannouncement-ion0gi3p6d) to check the original post of this **_50-Word Story Contest_ by @jayna</center>
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##### <center>Thanks for reading</center>
### <center>https://i.imgur.com/QtkN0S5.png?1</center>
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##### <center>**[Here](https://discord.gg/bcNKxEP), my invitation to join @EquipoCardumen on Discord (Spanish only).**
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<center>**[Here](https://discordapp.com/channels/415608386990768149/415608387460399116), the link to #SteemitSchool on Discord (English + all languages)** 


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@mdsohagm752 ·
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@flysky ·
Lightspeed to your good work here
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@marlyncabrera ·
Thank you, @flysky ☻
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@ablaze ·
Excellent writing here.... I love the dual meaning of elder you used in the story... This was a really strong debut.. Well done
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@marlyncabrera ·
You're too kind, @ablaze. 

I really liked the mysticism and elegance of your story. Loved it :D
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@ablaze ·
Not at all, and thank you :o)
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