Lost In Morgue Land - Crack (Part 3) by ruth-girl

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Lost In Morgue Land - Crack (Part 3)
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<blockquote>Previously on <strong>Lost In Morgue Land</strong><br>
Part I: <a href="https://steemit.com/writing/@ruth-girl/lost-in-morgue-land-welcome-part-1"><em><strong>Welcome</strong></em></a><br>
Part II: <a href="https://steemit.com/writing/@ruth-girl/lost-in-morgue-land-death-is-hard-part-2"><em><strong>Death Is Hard</strong></em></a></blockquote>
<p><img src="https://c.pxhere.com/photos/3e/80/animal_attractive_beautiful_brown_chest_close_closeup_close_up-819422.jpg!d" width="1200" height="747"/></p>
<p>&nbsp;<em>Image from:</em> <a href="https://pxhere.com/en/photo/819422"><em>pxhere.com</em></a> &nbsp;</p>
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<p><em>John has been in his "lost and found" drawer for the last couple of days. Life in the freezer is still (just like him), cold (just like him) and dark (just like his heart).</em></p>
<p><em>Screeching sounds and footsteps approaching. Two men are talking outside John's door.</em></p>
<p>- Where are we putting this beauty, Rick?</p>
<p>- Next to John Doe, Jim.</p>
<p>- They're gonna make a hell of a couple, don't you think? John and Jane Doe.</p>
<p><em>Jim bangs John's door and yells:</em></p>
<p>- It's your lucky day Mr Stiff Guy! We brought you company!</p>
<p>Hey you barbarian piece of shit! You just earned a haunting ghost once I get out of here! I swear I'm gonna find your home and play drums above your head all night!</p>
<p>- Jim, does the word "respect" mean anything to you?</p>
<p>- Oh, Rick! Marriage has cost you your sense of humor.</p>
<p>- And fapping has cost you your sense of sympathy!</p>
<p>- Mean, man! Mean! So, what happened to this lady here?</p>
<p>- Ah! Another sad story.</p>
<p>- You don't say! A sad story in a morgue, how unusual.</p>
<p>I hate to say I agree with the piece of shit...</p>
<p>- No, hers was tragic. See, this woman was probably a prostitute.</p>
<p>Aaah! Here comes another CSI episode, where's the pop corn?</p>
<p>- She was picked up from the street.</p>
<p>Bryne Street has always had the best girls...</p>
<p>- The client probably took her to his place or some nearby cheap motel.</p>
<p>"Family Life" was my favorite, discrete, clean and near the city center...</p>
<p>- Toxicology screen showed she had done drugs.</p>
<p>They make sex so much better, but...</p>
<p>- It seems that she had had just too much.</p>
<p>You give her just a little more than you should and the girl passes out...</p>
<p>- She passed out.</p>
<p>Which is not necessarily bad for you, as you can do whatever you want to her...</p>
<p>- Her client finished up and tried to wake her up.</p>
<p>Then you just give her a few slaps to wake her up...</p>
<p>- She wouldn't come round, so he probably panicked.</p>
<p>If she doesn't, some cold water might help...</p>
<p>- Loaded her in his car.</p>
<p>You put her back in your car...</p>
<p>- Drove her back where he had picked her.</p>
<p>Put the payment in her purse or bra if she is still dizzy...</p>
<p>- Opened the door and tossed her out.</p>
<p>Open the door and push her out, these girls are used to it, it's their job...</p>
<p>- Only she didn't fall on the sidewalk, but on the street.&nbsp;</p>
<p>There are always other "girls" around to pick up their "colleague"...</p>
<p>- Another car came right after a while. Driver was speeding and ran her down. Skull crashed, neck broken and left hand smashed.</p>
<p>And that is a side-effect of drugs quite unexpected...</p>
<p>- Now the police are looking for two suspects, the client that drugged her and the driver who... uhm, gave her that nice "facelift".</p>
<p>Oh! This is certainly not something I had done. I mean... I have picked up girls from the street and left them back while they were still high, but they were always half-conscious when I got them back. They were always talking, at least trying to when they were in my car. And I always waited for them to get on the sidewalk and find their "friends" before I drove away.</p>
<p>John! Who are you kidding? You always fucked, paid, and left. Never wasted a moment to make sure they got back on their feet.</p>
<p>- Any chance she might have been dead from an overdose, Rick?</p>
<p>- No, she was just unconscious, but the client panicked and wanted to get rid of her as soon as possible. That car really did all the job!</p>
<p>- And it ruined just her pretty face, right?</p>
<p>- Skull and neck, yes.</p>
<p>- So, the boobs remained intact?</p>
<p>- Seriously now!? Have you no shame, Jim?</p>
<p>- Since when did you get so prudent?</p>
<p>- Since when did you get so senseless?</p>
<p>Since when did I start to care?&nbsp;</p>
<h3>To be continued...</h3>
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<p><em>*Original story by</em> <a href="https://steemit.com/@ruth-girl"><em>@ruth-girl</em></a> <em>- Steemit, 2018</em>&nbsp;</p>
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<p>In this part we see John confronted with a sad story that reminds him of his old life. How he treated women for paid sex. A tragic incident makes him look back in his old "tactics" and question his behavior. The first time we see John crack  (like the poor woman's skull) and care(?) about someone else besides himself. The two other characters (Jim and Rick, from the first episode) represent another set of two different characters who are supposed to get John (and the reader) into having second thoughts.</p>
<h2>Your comments are welcome as they help me get better!</h2>
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<h2>Thank you so much for your time!</h2>
<p>Until my next post,<br>
Steem on and keep smiling, people!&nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
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@akiripromise · (edited)
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This ruth-girl can write so wellll.. plsI do well to write about the female version of john, a lady that did thesame thing John did - Resteemed
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@eurogee ·
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Exactly! Seeming very factual. But this is heartbreaking. What a bad way to go to hellfire. From being over drunk, then sex and then being run over by a speeding vehicle 😭.

*Rithie* you can represent and present imaginary things, making them seem so real. 

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@ruth-girl ·
Oh @eurogee thank you for taking the time to read and leave an encouraging comment! :)
 
This is a bad way to go, basically it's tragic for her because in the story she is a victim and that is how she should be so as to make John think back on his past actions and ethics.
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@ruth-girl ·
Thank you!!! I think I have to finish John off first before creating another such character. Thank you for the recommendation! I'll see if I can come up with something! :)
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@snarksnark ·
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Entertaining and deliciously disturbing. I like how John's character is turning out, he's much more believable now!
So, when's the next part coming out?
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@ruth-girl ·
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And he has to go through some "cold showers" in the next episodes. I try to get one every week, so I believe next tuesday-wednesday it should be out ;)
Thanks for the feedback!!
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@snarksnark ·
The pleasure is mine!
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@samminator ·
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Mehn, that was too mean. Now he has put the driver into a mess for giving the poor girl a "facelift".
That's the worst way to die: Being drugged and gotten run-over by a car.

Nice piece Ruthie. I'm waiting for your next episode. I really salute your creative acumen @ruth-girl
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@ruth-girl ·
It was mean, a slap on John's face just like he deserves and more slaps are coming.

Thank you for the encouragement, @samminator!! It means a lot! :D
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@pearlumie · (edited)
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@ruth-girl ...Lol, this storyline is killing me.. When are we to expect the next episode ??? Really anticipating.

Your touch makes it look real. It's really a nice continuation from where you stopped. I hope you release the continuation soon
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@ruth-girl ·
Hehe! I'm getting another one out Tuesday or Wednesday ;)

I'm working on the next "adventure" in my mind...
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@pearlumie ·
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Aiit... We are waiting for it..
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