Surrender (Flash Fiction) by ruth-girl

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Surrender (Flash Fiction)
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<sup> *Image source: [pexels.com](https://www.pexels.com/photo/blindfolded-woman-with-finger-on-lips-grayscale-portrait-731864/)* </sup>

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> *When words are accompanied by keynotes, images feel more lively...*

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v47pg_r-fLQ&list=RDmIhI23gBBPQ&index=4

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*- Don't be afraid.*

She felt the soft touch of silk above her eyes and then a gentle pull as he tied the scarf at the back of her head.

His fingers started to slip downwards. 

Her sleek hair, the back of her neck, her delicate, round shoulders.

Shivers. She could feel every tiny hair of her body pulling up as his warm breaths met with her skin. 

His nose was now sniffing the perfume behind her ears. It was something she had been doing for a long time. Drawing men to the spots on her body she wanted them to be. And this was an easy trick, but every one of them would fall for it. 

Now it was his tongue that was moving in circles around her right lobe. A gentle bite at the tip of her ear, accompanied by a short sucking and then another bite and another sucking and another and another. His hands were already exploring the front of her body. After a quick stop on her breasts they started moving down. A touch around her belly and further down to lightly pinch her hips and then they go up again. 

Sneaking up her black dress, they reach for her underwear. 

*Oops*, she wasn't wearing any.

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A short you have not got used to reading from me, I must say this piece came up last night while I was editing [my entry](https://whaleshares.io/@ruth-girl/turn-a-blind-eye-fifty-word-story-contest) for the new [50-word story contest](https://whaleshares.io/@sarah-xx/fifty-word-story-contest-blindness-announcing-winners). The autoplay on youtube kept putting one song after the other and then the track above began to play and so did the *fantasy* you just read...

**Any thoughts?** I was afraid *(and sleepy)* to continue the scene. Should I be less prude and dare do something different for a change? 

![](https://steemitimages.com/DQmUsDx6pen1XAB66xGNezuiZ9RYoXEv9U98MqHzTxFV1dE/15.png)

## Thank you so much for your time!
Until my next post,
Steem on and keep smiling, people!

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<sup> *Original story by @ruth-girl - 2019* </sup>
<sup> *Post also shared on my Whaleshares blog* </sup>
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@samminator · 
There's something particularly interesting about this piece... This could make a good romantic scene in movie. Especially the part you wrote: 
> His hands were already exploring the front of her body. After a quick stop on her breasts they started moving down. A touch around her belly and further down to lightly pinch her hips and then they go up again.

I can only imagine this 😂😂.

Nice piece Ruthie
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Thank you, Sammi! I am developing the scene and keeping it in my records. Who knows where this could be useful :)
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