Open Mic Night Contest Wk 34 Entry: God's Cityzen Part 3 (Original Song) by verbal-d

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Open Mic Night Contest Wk 34 Entry: God's Cityzen Part 3 (Original Song)
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**Headphones are recommended, press play and scroll down to read the lyrics, or watch the video and enjoy the performance.**

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V4Hr0rV-qJk

Full Song Lyrics and Due Credits provided below.
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Song's Due Credits
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**Beat Produced** by *VMA Beats*
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**Verses 1 Written, Created & Performed** by *Verbal D*
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**Full Song Lyrics**
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*Verbal D*
**Verse 1:**
This is God's world and I'm a citizen
I stand for truth but I sit in sin
My bible's a lot to read, I wonder when I'm finishing
But I know it's my soul I'm replenishing

It's not always a hit and win
But I can't get hooked gotta watch what I'm fishing in
It's not always hell I'm envisioning
But if I do it's a fiery imprisonment

I have a judgement, so what's my sentencing?

Is it worse than Mortal Kombat's finishings?
Thrown inside a volcanic fire kindling?
Knowing that it burns forever, never dwindling.
Can't plan escape or shake these chains hindering.

I cannot fathom or picture this, these images
I'll find a breakthrough point, lines of scrimmages
Cause when I think of these rhymes, mind's limitless
I'm apart of something bigger than me, God's appendages
Made from the dust in the land, I am indigenous

Dear Son of The Father of great parentage
Will I make it to heaven? What's the percentages?
Born as a sinner, never truly had innocence
Christ rebuild my life, that's assemblage

Guide my path without so many wreckages.
Make my mind the definition of what vintage is 
A man of understanding over standing all his differences… 
Then I hope you're willing to accept me through your heritage

I accept you, no longer am I a heretic
A vessel of God like a pod with no rhetoric
Rotating the Word just like a chariot…
Entering a spiritual battle until I'm perishing...

Song Lyrics Copyrighted by Verbal D

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@jedau ·
Oh, man, I totally did *not* expect that! That unorthodox beat really tied everything together. I didn't think this was a head bobber when I read parts 1 and 2, but it definitely is. This has quicly risen to be one of my all-time favorites of yours, and that completely caught me off-guard. I am speechless. You keep one-upping yourself, brother. A sign of inherent greatness!
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@verbal-d ·
Thank you very much bro, I am always surprised by how much you are surprised by my music lol It's pretty funny to me but I'm glad you enjoy the different approaches I embark upon. However the beat sounds, I just try and compliment it as best as I can and become meshed into the music and drive it forward, appreciate your uplifting words!
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@jedau ·
You always come up with surprising stuff, is why! Often times, artists come up with a brand that people identify them with. The advantage is familiarity, and the disadvantage is monotony. Your brand is fueled by your passion and your love for the craft, that's why I believe that you will never be stagnant :D
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@chrisgoans ·
Dude! Very awesome. I really like your flow and loving the positive vibes. I'm an artist as well so you should reach out if you ever wanted to collab I think we would mesh well!
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@verbal-d · (edited)
Thank you very much for your feedback, encouraging kind comments and interest. I am always open to collabs, especially with a positive vibe. The message is indeed important in my music. I'll check out your page and see if you have posted any music to hear your style and approach :)
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@chrisgoans ·
Here is one you might like https://youtu.be/YmuyhCaQV1o 

Clean and positive hiphop.
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@heymattsokol ·
solid flow @verbal-d! this is my first chance to hear you rap, this is tight dude
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@verbal-d ·
Oh thanks really? I've been doing open mic every week. you should hear week 33 Haven, it's one of my favorite songs to perform, I appreciate you reaching out and giving my music a listen, most grateful indeed bro
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@lloyddavis ·
yep, head bobbing here for sure :) another strong entry, I do admire your consistent effort.
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@verbal-d ·
Thank you very much my friend, I always appreciate your feedback and encouraging comments. I try to keep the rhythm sharp :)
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@soundlegion ·
wooooo yes yes @verbal-d is in the house all smooth
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@verbal-d ·
thanks for the gracious praise as always my friend, I do my best, I'm glad it is well received
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@cryptofarmer ·
Amazing! thanks for sharing
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@verbal-d ·
Thank you so much for listening, I truly appreciate it!
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@jaybird ·
Oooo I'm diggin' that piano loop. This one has a real strong tone to it man, sort of "conscious," dialogue as well! I'd love to see a performance of you doing your thing over top a live band! I just saw Oddisee yesterday night.  Sort of similar vibe going on in this track to some of his material.
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Nice thanks for the feedback bro, I love performing with a live band, I definitely prefer mic checks beforehand, there have been many live performances where the sound engineer just did not know how to balance out the sound, not sure if it was lack of knowledge or limited equipment, but that definitely affects the overall presentation. That piano loop is indeed so catchy, appreciate you listening
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