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"bacteria" a five minute freewrite by felt.buzz

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"bacteria" a five minute freewrite


This is the freewrite challenge. I am using @mariannewest’s #freewrite prompt to write this piece (https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-724-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-bacteria)





Today’s prompt is:
#
# *bacteria*

This is part ***One Hundred And Twenty Two*** of my current freewrite series - I’m calling it *RatsNest* for now - (posted daily Monday - Saturday).
<sub><sub>You can find parts [one](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/rate-a-five-minute-freewrite-sk2zvj8m), [two](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/nest-a-five-minute-freewrite-za3ofggj), [three](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/tart-a-five-minute-freewrite-tp9zof3x), [four](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/chapter-a-five-minute-freewrite-n0h1sucr), [five](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/nunchucks-a-five-minute-freewrite-vduzzvuz), [six](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/rodeo-a-five-minute-freewrite-pdkwq5aa), [seven](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/glass-bottle-a-five-minute-freewrite-bruj63tt), [eight](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/rule-a-five-minute-freewrite-vauv2luv), [nine](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/ear-phones-a-five-minute-freewrite-dembr0fw), [ten](https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/carnation-a-five-minute-freewrite-brgn4ifn), 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# …
Other creatures joined the Hungher. There was one that seemed to be made up of a writhing collection of smaller beasts, that reminding Magenta of looking at bacteria under a microscope. 

She felt Nunchucks shrink further behind her, and make a pathetic yelp noise. 

Gently, Magenta reached out with her Power. Her Benevolent Dragon touched each creature's mind as it left its prison. 

She tried to tell it she was a friend, it was she that had helped it escape its captivity, it was her that could help it find its way home. 

But first, she needed the help of all the creatures. She needed to open this door. 

Through her connection with their minds, she could hear them think. Creatures who were natural enemies, predators and prey in other worlds, other dimensions, spoke with each other, trying to decide if they could trust the woman with the Powerful Dragon.

# ...
As usual, I started with the freewrite prompt and used themostdangerouswritingapp.com to write the first five minutes (and then popped it into google docs to check for errors and tidy it up a bit):

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# ...

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