RE: Crypto Academy / Season 3 / Week 4 - Homework Post for @yohan2on || All About Blockchain cuties universe by yohan2on

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· @yohan2on ·
Hi @greatness96

Thanks for participating in the Steemit Crypto Academy

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Rating criteria |Calculation out of 2 
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|Quality of presentation|1/2
|Originality|1/2
|Compliance with topic|1/2
|Clarity of language|1/2
|Quality of analysis|1/2
|**Grand total**|5 

I am glad you were able to play your first ever blockchain video game. Thanks for your review on **Blockchain cuties Universe,**Though it had quite shallow information on **Blockchain Cuties Universe.** 

When I monitored your article using the Grammarly web application, I found plenty of errors. I recommend that you make good use of that tool in order to minimize on the grammatical errors in your work. 

Forinstance;

>Dogs
They are loyal companions. They always strive to accomplish difficult tasks and never run away froom challenges.

Change **froom** to **from** 

>Their adventure bonus is defense +2.

Change **defense** to **defence**

>For example, a player using a unique cat **"have"** full ownership of it and he can transfer it or **"sale"** it any time he deems fit.

Change **have** to **has**

The word sale is out of context. 
Kindly change **"Sale"** to **"Sell"**

And many more, that's why you need to always use Grammarly to rectify any errors before publishing your article. 

>3.There is no provision for an offline adventure, thus people without internet in remote areas can not have access to the game.

This is a general challenge for the entire crypto space. Governments should devise means of helping its people learn the basic practical internet knowledge.
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@greatness96 ·
Thank you.
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