Hi @greatness96 Thanks for participating in the Steemit Crypto Academy **Feedback** Rating criteria |Calculation out of 2 ------------------|----------------- |Quality of presentation|1/2 |Originality|1/2 |Compliance with topic|1/2 |Clarity of language|1/2 |Quality of analysis|1/2 |**Grand total**|5 I am glad you were able to play your first ever blockchain video game. Thanks for your review on **Blockchain cuties Universe,**Though it had quite shallow information on **Blockchain Cuties Universe.** When I monitored your article using the Grammarly web application, I found plenty of errors. I recommend that you make good use of that tool in order to minimize on the grammatical errors in your work. Forinstance; >Dogs They are loyal companions. They always strive to accomplish difficult tasks and never run away froom challenges. Change **froom** to **from** >Their adventure bonus is defense +2. Change **defense** to **defence** >For example, a player using a unique cat **"have"** full ownership of it and he can transfer it or **"sale"** it any time he deems fit. Change **have** to **has** The word sale is out of context. Kindly change **"Sale"** to **"Sell"** And many more, that's why you need to always use Grammarly to rectify any errors before publishing your article. >3.There is no provision for an offline adventure, thus people without internet in remote areas can not have access to the game. This is a general challenge for the entire crypto space. Governments should devise means of helping its people learn the basic practical internet knowledge.