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Outside of some half-rhyme-scheme and some 3/4 wording (I gotta say I think Neglection is my favorite "artistic license" word) and some full-blown self-esteem issues these were not that bad. I mean, I wouldn't put them in a showcase but, especially for being younger, they're pretty well done. I actually find it funny reading some of my old poems and thinking "I wrote this?" Only to be more impressed than I was going in. But this is coming from someone that, for a High School Freshman essay wrote a comparison of "Women" and "Babes" (I was trying to incite a reaction in people, I don't really think that way). Also funny to think my Freshman High School essays got A's in college as my Brother, unbeknownst to me, swiped them and submitted them to his English class in college.
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Oh definite self esteem issues but the poem was honest in that I was abused horribly so there was clear reason for my complete and utter lack of self worth. Phwew glad to be out of that mental and physical place now! :D Thanks though, I still think they are pretty awful but that's because I now am an avid reader and write much better than I did at the age of twelve. More than bad they are just...cringey. :) Wow! Kinda awesome to find out it aced in college tho, huh? :D Thanks for the story. ^_^
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For your own sake I'm glad you got out of that situation. Too many kids are unable to get out of the situation or get sucked back into it.
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