Were you trying to make me dizzy? Because you succeded haha. I've read it twice and still not sure what you're talking about.

Wow !!! What a poem....just mindbloing ..
Really an excellent poem....@d-pend ...I am very surprised after reading this poem....best of luck for poetry challenge...hope that this poem will be first

So important to understand the machine exists for the people and not the people for the machine. The way to growth again is empower the people. They will power the machine.

A brilliant write as always, d-pend:)

fitting this to an asymmetric newspaper column alongside pictures of post-mod art?

would love to leave a longer comment, but about to take a much needed long walk, my friend, so only a few notes.

Some of the line breaks strike abruptly, the counter balance of having such a visually engaging aesthetic. Most notable in that last stanza, a few broken thoughts where clarity might suit the message more - even noting that the message is coming through a crippled circuit board.

My interpretation after two reads, just so you can see how a reader's eyes approaches (I know the value these can sometimes hold), the overabundance of both "expert voices" and noise in every medium of today, the blurred bar between experts & hobbyists and the platform that has given voice and credence to targeted campaigns gripping the hearts of many in a renewed snake-oil culture. maybe a minor commentary on the fear of missing out.

and some lines are just masterpieces in themselves; looking at you:
>Drowned out by the profound silence
Of the cosmos screaming about reality

Awesome. Very Ginsberg-esque, and also for some reason makes me think of one of George Carlin's stand up bits - a potent combination. You do a great job at capturing that feeling of being overwhelmed by the sheer intensity of advertising. Reminds me of a couple of my own pieces I'll have to try and dig out soon. Cheers!

Poetry you is the best @d-pend

When are you going to teach me how to design my post like this when I make a post on poetry?
This is so lovely, beautifully written.
I need to start designing mine like this.

#steemitschool, we win together

This sounds righteously indignant, @d-pend, mocking the mockers.  Still can't figure out who technocratic prophet or pompous experts might be, but there is a delicious, defiant swagger, here, that leaves me smiling...

Tipping my dunce's cap to this:

>burn
It as incense on the altar
& compartmentalize
The slights and the
Perfections
Until it is
Marred
Beyond
Any means
Of detection.

This is really awesome it reminded me of a cool country song 
i imagined this like a country song

Nice poem and great Steemit School poetry challenge.I already a member of discord group.

Hello @ d-pend how beautiful is the poetry that each reader interprets in their own way. For example; This phrase seems eloquent:

> The voiceless voice speaking nothing nonlocally

*This poetry have an journey around the money but i really liked the lines which saying as people are living in the negative environment and enjoying it and yes nowadays the negativity is spread in all over the world and which inturn increasing the tensions. And those lines which says as we know the truth but still we have to act as deaf. Thanks for sharing this deep poetry with us. Wishing you an great day. Stay blessed. 🙂*

the way you presented the poem is outstanding today beautifully done

Wonderful piece of work with heart touching wording that actually gave me goosebumps to understand the materialistic approach of life.
>If it's
Too loud
Change the
Channel on the
Radio, smash your
Television with intelligence
You're seeing technological guts
On the street, wires and such, scraped
capacitors, internet selfies transmogrified, oy!

this was a beautiful poem to read today thanks for sharing

amazing image...thank you @d-pend

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you need to teach me your formatting wizardry :P ...Question whyno love for day 6 what did the poor thing do to you ;)  Lastly there is a lot of really great imagery here, I loved it all but for some reason the word sombre sat sideways with me almost like it was wearing a costume pretending to be one of the crowd but was an impostor :P I know it sounds insane but every time you used it I wanted to exile it ...

My friend @d-pend. I will take one bottle of today's elixir of life. Can I get a discount?

I really like the creativity of the layout. I would copy you but it would be obvious... So if I got this write your talking about our modern world and how messages are all around us programming us even flying through thing air and we are breathing it all in.