Hey @nationall! I liked the poem, but it's kinda crunched together in just 1 block of text. If you could separate that a bit, I believe it would be much more attractive! PS001AAA: Please take this as wise advice, not as an insult! PS001AAB: If you're interested in writing more poetry, check out my poetry contest [here](https://steemit.com/steemmonsters/@pizzachain/steemmonsters-poetry-contest-steemmonsters-cards-steemmonsters-packs-and-sbi-shares). It got some neat prizes too!