Silencio / Silence by amart29

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Silencio / Silence
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<p>Un saludo a todos, el siguiente relato fue inspirado por el arte digital de @xpilar, los invito a que visiten su blog. La imagen que motivó este relato es la siguiente.</p> 

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<p>Greetings to everyone, the following story was inspired by the digital art of  @xpilar, I invite you to visit his blog. The picture that motivated  this story is the following.   </p>
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<center><img src="https://steemitimages.com/p/EEEoA8oLaAxsTkPYAARp78o5cJA1o6Chv9x98TzCFT6v5GtAcRPvGPCtm2d9yvffVAx8be1BFANGzSPNg4q9n3mt1AM7sNwFnfQRFtnQUmWchz6JpBBh56zMnPLuAZVWB9WiwBnXx4gDAUw8sea38?format=match&mode=fit&width=640"><br/><br/><i><a href="https://steemit.com/art/@xpilar/the-image-is-made-of-own-imagination-and-thoughts-competition-53">Fuente/Source</a></i></center>

<center><img src="https://steemitimages.com/p/qjrE4yyfw5pEPvDbJDzhdNXM7mjt1tbr2kM3X28F6SraZgAcuNC1J5ELnfnXyJgcdxiakeujt6vZGjgG4c7D2VwXw3bkVGWnbQbzVqwUUHBefg18cvdibnTG" alt=""/><br/><br/></center>
<h3>Español</h3>
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<h2>Silencio</h2>

Es fascinante como la vida puede persistir ante las adversidades, llegué a pensar aquella tarde, mientras recostado sobre un charco de mi propia sangre, veía como una gaviota saltaba hábilmente para escapar, por unos milímetros, de las fauces de una serpiente que, tras arrastrarse silenciosamente, entre los ya fríos restos de mi nave, se abalanzó sobre ella, intentando devorarla.

Aún recuerdo el silencio de la batalla, esa aterradora falta de sensaciones sonoras que puedan decirte que sigues con vida, en medio de una vorágine, en la que todo a tu alrededor trata de destruirte. 

Durante la batalla sólo puedes escuchar los sonidos de tu propia nave, pero nada que provenga del exterior, puedes ver como las naves se desintegran como trozos de juguetes para armar lanzados contra el piso, sin fuego ni grandes y ruidosos estallidos, sólo los ocasionales llamados de auxilio de los pilotos, que no pueden escapar a tiempo de las cabinas y son lanzados al espacio durante la destrucción de la nave, muchos de ellos a tal velocidad, que sus cuerpos no son encontrados nunca.

Por mucho que te hayan entrenado para enfrentarte en un combate, por más que hayas aprendido a mantener la calma, el enfoque, la cordura; mientras otro centenar de individuos, en naves como la tuya e igual de atemorizados que tú, tratan al igual que tú, de evitar morir, matando a otros. Es casi imposible mantener la calma en una situación así.

Sólo recuerdo el silencio de mi nave, siendo impactada por el plasma de uno de los cañones de un crucero de las tropas del Parlamento, y el intenso golpe de la onda expansiva, que dentro de la nave, ocasionó el silencioso estallido y después de eso nada, hasta despertarme aturdido, ensordecido por el ruido del reingreso a la atmósfera, el atronador sonido de cientos de piezas mecánicas sacudiéndose, chocando unas con otras, el intenso silbido del aire y finalmente el violento golpe y los múltiples rebotes en el mar, antes de que la nave quedara medio enterrada en la arena y yo saliera despedido, para caer empalado en la rama de un árbol derribado por el impacto.

Estuve en esa playa durante cinco días, mientras veía a las gaviotas ir y venir, lagartijas, cangrejos y serpientes caminaron y reptaron sobre mis piernas extendidas sobre la arena. Pude ver como aun derribado el árbol cuya rama atravesaba mi costado luchaba por mantenerse con vida, al igual que mi cuerpo, asistido por la compresión generada por mi traje de vuelo, lo que previno que muriera desangrado. 

Al quinto día de mi accidente, la vida me dio una nueva muestra de su testarudez, de su rotunda negación a rendirse. La rama que, teñida por mi sangre ya seca, atravesaba mi cuerpo, me sorprendió con nuevas hojas, que de un intenso verde asomaban entre la astillada madera. Entrada la tarde de ese mismo día, una nave patrulla de las fuerzas leales al Parlamento me encontraron.

<p><em><strong>Texto de @amart29 y arte digital de @xpilar, febrero de 2020</strong></em></p>

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<h3>English</h3>

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<h2>Silence</h2>

It is fascinating how life can persist in the face of adversity, I came to think that afternoon, while lying on a pool of my own blood, I saw how a seagull skillfully jumped to escape, by a few millimeters, from the jaws of a snake that, after crawling silently among the already cold remains of my ship, pounced on it, trying to devour it.

I still remember the silence of the battle, that terrifying lack of sound sensations that can tell you that you are still alive, in the middle of a vortex, in which everything around you tries to destroy you. 

During the battle you can only hear the sounds of your own ship, but nothing that comes from the outside, you can see how the ships disintegrate like pieces of toys to arm thrown on the floor, without fire or large and loud bursts, only the occasional call for help from the pilots, who can not escape in time from the cabins and are thrown into space during the destruction of the ship, many of them at such speed, that their bodies are never found.

No matter how much you have been trained to face a combat, no matter how much you have learned to keep calm, focus, sanity; while another hundred individuals, in ships like yours and just as frightened as you, try as you do, to avoid dying, by killing others. It is almost impossible to keep calm in such a situation.

I only remember the silence of my ship, being hit by the plasma of one of the cannons of a cruiser of the troops of the Parliament, and the intense blow of the expansive wave, that inside the ship, caused the silent explosion and after that nothing, until I woke up dazed, deafened by the noise of the re-entry to the atmosphere, the thunderous sound of hundreds of mechanical parts shaking, colliding with each other, the intense whistling of the air and finally the violent crash and multiple bounces at sea, before the ship was half buried in the sand and I was thrown out, only to fall impaled on a tree branch that had been knocked down by the impact.

I was on that beach for five days, as I watched the gulls come and go, lizards, crabs and snakes walked and crawled on my legs stretched out on the sand. I could see the tree still felled, with its branch piercing my side, struggling to stay alive, as well as my body, aided by the compression generated by my flight suit, which prevented me from bleeding to death. 

On the fifth day of my accident, life gave me a new sign of its stubbornness, of its steadfast refusal to give up. The branch that, stained by my already dry blood, pierced my body, surprised me with new leaves, which were of an intense green, peeking through the splintered wood. In the late afternoon of the same day, a patrol ship of the forces loyal to the Parliament found me.

<p><em><strong>Text of @amart29 and digital art of @xpilar, February 2020</strong></em></p>

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<p>Sólo me queda agradecer a @xpilar por permitirme usar su arte digital en mi publicación y por motivarla. <strong><em>Muchas Gracias @xpilar</em></strong></p>
<p>Gracias a todos por visitar mi publicación, espero sus comentario y agradezco su apoyo, hasta la próxima</p>
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<p>I can only thank @xpilar for allowing me to use his digital art in my publication and for motivating my creation. <strong><em>Thank you very much @xpilar</em></strong></p>
<p>Thank you all for visiting my publication, I hope your comments and I appreciate your support, until next time</p>

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@jcrodriguez ·
Buen relato. Xpilar monto nuev aimagen, voy a ver si me animo  a  escribir algo con esta. Exitos man !
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@xpilar ·
thanks for the great story @amart29
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@rbalzan79 ·
Excelente relato amigo @amart29 gracias por compartirlo. Saludos.
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