Common Mistakes to Avoid when Writing Great Fiction. by fiction-trail

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Common Mistakes to Avoid when Writing Great Fiction.
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<H3>While working this morning on editing a post, I looked up some common mistakes that both new and professional writers often make. Here are some that I have noticed recently in my own writing and in mainstream published works.</H3><hr><p>

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<code> ProTip: <hr>If you are using regional dialect or slang for a character, remember that narrative doesn't use those unless it is first person narrative. Typically the narrator uses standard language </code><hr>
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<li><b>Editing mistakes</b><br>
 Spelling, punctuation, grammar, formatting. Everyone makes these mistakes and it often takes a new pair of eyes to find them. Get someone else to read it or put it aside until your own eyes are renewed a little.  If you still have trouble there are grammar guides online and great tools like <a href = "www.grammarly.com">Grammarly</a> to help. </li><p>

<li><b>Using dialog as exposition</b><br> Either internal monolog or character conversation can be used to explain events, but overuse is a danger.  <em>I thought to myself, "There are only two way out of this building, the front door, which was covered by girl scouts, and the back door, which had the junkyard dog."  </em>... No one really thinks that to themselves. Consider using "show me don't tell me" methods. <em> He peeked out the curtain as the girl scouts approached the front door and decided to risk the junkyard dog out back.</em></li><p>

<li><b>Limiting the senses</b><br>  Early writers may often narrow down their descriptions to either sight or sound, which should be avoided, of course. But even good writers can forget that most experiences are multi-sensual. It's the bitterness <em>and</em> the heat of coffee, the copper odor <em>and</em> the slickness of blood, the combination of senses which makes events real to us. </li>
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<li><b>Using a Magic Ring</b><br> As every Hobbit knows, when things are darkest, that's when a Magic Ring can be found laying on the floor. But unless you are actually JRR Tolkien, perhaps you should set things up ahead of time so that surprise revelations aren't needed to get your character out of a hole. A common saying in writing is, "If you show a knife, use the knife", meaning that plot devices should not be written-in unless you need them. The opposite is just as true, if you use a knife, show it ahead of time. Write the device in even if you have to go back to the beginning and change things around. Don't make a Magic Ring or Spaceship or Long Lost Cousin pop out of nowhere just in time, Readers know what that means. </li>
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@natureofbeing ·
excellent advice
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@fiction-trail ·
Thanks
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@olivera-despina ·
I would add: "if you use a Magic Ring, make it as tricky as Tolkien did"))
Great article, very accurate advice.
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@fiction-trail ·
Thanks!

At least Tolkien wrote like 10 other books supporting that one device. Many authors won't write 10 words.
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@countryinspired ·
Great advice!  I no longer write fiction but I used to.
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@fiction-trail ·
Thanks! I'm planning to prepare a series by going through several tutorials and my old college books on writing so a lot of these will apply to all kinds of writing.
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@mgaft1 ·
Hello @fiction-trail, 
 
I hope you can help me.  Not only me, because the idea Iā€™d like to present to you can help many writers. You seem to be the right type of person ā€“ someone who can organize the venture.

A few years ago I participated in monthly writing contests at one of the Yahoo groups. The premise of the contest was that once a month a group owner was proposing the story title. Then, everybody who wanted to participate submitted their own short story that used this title. The time to submit was one month usually from the fifteenth of one month and until the fifteenth of another one. Then the appointed jury decided, which three entries won. The process of decision making usually took 2 weeks. During these two weeks, the entries were posted for a critique by the members of this group. This was a good learning experience and a lot of fun.  I wonder if something like this can be done on Steemit? 

As far as the jury part here is here's how I suggest this be done.  You are an obviously a literary person and probably know a couple more.  Each of the contest entries could be graded based on the 1 to 100 scale, then the highest average will determine the winner and two runners-up. Of course, this is only a suggestion.  You can think of whatever grading system that is more comfortable for you. Winning entries could be given some kind of Steemit badge of fame, which one of the philanthropic artists here could create.

I gather that there are people here who could whip out a story in one day. However, we also have many people here who have a day job. Therefore, I think a month duration seems appropriate.

All the best
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@fiction-trail ·
I've been thinking about doing exactly that for a while now. 

But I should tell youthat the [fiction-trail discussion group](https://discord.gg/k3zHukq) is already a little daily contest. Only a certain number of posts can be chosen and so we always try to pick the best after reading and discussing them. Rewards are the group vote, and if they win the second tier, many more votes for the Steem Trail.
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@mgaft1 ·
I joined your group.  But daily contests are tough.  It usually takes me 2 weeks from the origination of an idea to the final implementation.   I fidget around it like a chicken around an egg. LOL

Thank you
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@spark ·
Nice! Thanks for the tips! I just posted Chapter 1 of a fantasy story here on Steemit.
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