CAN WE CALL THIS A POEM? PLEASE TELL ME.. by honourmaus

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· @honourmaus ·
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CAN WE CALL THIS A POEM? PLEASE TELL ME..
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**YOU DIDN'T FOLLOW ME**
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Are you not the one that promised to embark on the journey with me? 
Then why did you disappoint me?
We promised to go to embark on the journey together,
But just a few minutes to the journey,
You said you are no longer interested......
You know that's too bad.

What I Failed to comprehend
Was your logical way of putting it
You made it hard for me
In such a way that 
I needed to seek elders advice on it
What a disappointment!!! 

But I must tell you something, 
The advice I received was a helping One 
Simply because it skyrocket me
I had never imagined it been like this
Now, it seems like I'm  working alone
But numerous people are working on the part too
So, the truth is that
I'm only walking my part on the road
And others are only working their part too

Don't get it twisted yet, 
Now I am smiling 
The journey I started with a step 
Is now about to End with a step

I'm thankful 
Thanks to the Good Advice I was  Given 
This is the thing that has ever happened to me 
I'm grateful I didn't look at the side of yours 
Had it been I do
I wouldn't have been here today

Now I can call you
Just to inform you
That the me in me
That is different from the you in you
Is just a step to get there finally 
Now I just took the step
Don't hang up
I'm there already. 

Trust Me....

I'm A Success

FORGET NOT THE UPCOMING EVENT
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*CAN WE CALL IT A POEM?*
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*DON'T FORGET LEARNING IS A CONTINUOUS PROCESS*
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I JUST TRIED TO DO A BIT OF IT... LOL
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I REMAIN YOUR BOY @honourmaus
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@valency1 ·
Haha! It can be called a poem but some minor things needs to be added
   You tried a lot.
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@honourmaus ·
Oh!!!  Really? 

I'm glad to hear that, please can you tell me those minor things to be added?
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@valency1 ·
Nothing much,  just that it looks as if  you were writing. But i just got through it now, it's a good poem. maybe you should'nt write it like a story
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@jerryhuge ·
Thanks for the perfect post! @honourmaus
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@honourmaus ·
Are you sure you read through?
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@bigbear ·
I think it is a poem and you are telling a lovely story, myself I can not write poems but this told be something in a very nice way.  So to me it was a poem.
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@honourmaus · (edited)
WoW!!!! I also don't know how to write a poem, bit it's something I like reading.....  I just give it a trial by Writing it
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@bigbear ·
I really think it is very good.
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@gamzeuzun ·
great job @honourmaus  
https://s26.postimg.org/bvc9fs5ft/U5drf23gj_J5t85j4_Guqp2_Wi_WHz_Vt_NRE.gif
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@honourmaus ·
Thanks a lot
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@iretomiwa ·
Nice one bro!
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@honourmaus ·
Thanks bri
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@gunneresq ·
Well i would say it is a random thoughts in form of a poem. Not entirely a poem though. A poem is always written in condensed form, with each line and stanza a maze or puzzle to be solved. 

Most times the rhythmic effect of the words should be highlight and sometimes with rhymes, but not always.
however, it doesnt take away the beauty of this work. Well done @honourmaus.
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@honourmaus ·
Thanks a lot bro, I so much appreciate the contribution..... 

I actually envy poet

I like poetry
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@gunneresq ·
We cant be everything at the same time. We just have to know that which we are good at and become special in it.
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@eurogee ·
A bad poem rather๐Ÿ˜
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@honourmaus ·
Haha!!! @eurogee you Just tell me frankly, no twisting in any way.... ๐Ÿ˜ข
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@oniraphaeleu ·
To me it is more of a song.
Just turn it into music. Lol.
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@honourmaus ·
LOL
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@jeaniepearl ·
It is
And a nice one
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@sweetestglo-eu ·
Its between a poem and thinking out aloud ... Nice one
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