Openmic Week 33 - Original Song "Wandering" - jaybird by jaybird

openmic · @jaybird · May 19 '17 (edited)

$17.65

Openmic Week 33 - Original Song "Wandering" - jaybird

I'm back with another Original Song tiled " Wandering."  This one is a bit of a weird submission for me because the song is written from a female perspective.  

The concept is: The internal dialogue and emotional turmoil of a women who has difficultly seeing her parter interact with other women and constantly second guesses the stability of their relationship. 

For me, this was an incredibly odd song to compose, sing  and submit to openmic as I intend it to be sung by a female vocalist.  I'm trying to break out of my self-conscious shell a bit more these days, so I decided to do it anyways.   I've done my best to channel my inner women here lol, hopefully it came through ok in this performance.   

Alternatively, I may come out with a version of this tune  from the Male perspective and see if that translates well.  

Enjoy! 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7EwtZI27B1U&feature=youtu.be

![IMG_5874.jpg](https://steemitimages.com/DQmYGT74huGThwwbX7qb3NQMfPHyBa3jwxm1q4guQg93TaX/IMG_5874.jpg)

jaybird ~

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@steemit-life · May 17 '17

Nice one @jaybird! Keep it up man:)

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@jaybird · May 17 '17 (edited)

$0.07

Thank you! That's my goal ~

👍 steemit-life

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@steemit-life · May 17 '17

Yes Sir:)

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@timothympratt · May 18 '17

Nice!

👍 timothympratt

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@luzcypher · May 20 '17

And the hits keep coming

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@jaybird · May 20 '17

Just started on the next one!

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@soundlegion · May 24 '17

$0.09

your a hell of a writer my friend.    God we def need to do a song at some point.   Off my work load for recording for a bit still, but I'm gonna get some ideas you got drive and great tunes.

👍 soundlegion, jaybird

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@dreamsonics · May 25 '17

Very nice.  You have a good range.

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@jaybird · May 25 '17

Thank you. Glad everyone is enjoying the shots.

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@verbal-d · May 29 '17

$0.05

I've also written some songs for females to sing, you executed this pretty well bro, always singing with passion and energy, that's what brings your songs out with an extra flair, thoroughly enjoyed

👍 jaybird

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@jaybird · May 29 '17

Thanks @verbal-d.  Always appreciate your feedback.  Kinda odd writing for the opposite sex right?  Never really sure if you are capturing an accurate point of view that other females will sympathize with.   I see you got in early this week lol checking it out now!!!

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@verbal-d · May 29 '17

You're most welcome, it can be strange, but there are many connective topics that are tied to both genders, and we can pull ideas from experience and interaction. But you did pretty well, and hope you enjoyed the entry, I am trying to get in early nowadays since I am pressed for time

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