Culpa by jcalero

View this thread on steempeak.com
· @jcalero · (edited)
$12.54
Culpa
<html>
<p>Es mediodía cuando vuelvo de un sueño sin sueños, la primera sensación luego de abrir los ojos es un detestable sabor amargo en mi boca. Migraña, un mareo que anuncia nauseas. Cualquier sonido es intolerable, escucho como el corazón con su golpe seco, bajo y regular se vuelve un martillo golpeándome en la cabeza. La claridad del día ahora es una luz enceguecedora que agrava la tortura.</p>
<p>Corro a enjuagar mi boca, esperando que pueda borrar el sabor. Bebo el agua a mi alcance, pero es insuficiente para calmar la sed que me consume, y mientras lo hago noto su sabor distinto, amargo. Intento aclarar mi mente, recordar exactamente que pasó y como llegue hasta acá, pero los recuerdos se mezclan en una maraña de imágenes distorsionadas.&nbsp;</p>
<p>No merezco esto, no me gané nunca un castigo tan cruel. Es cierto, reconozco que hiero a los demás; pero me consuela pensar que no tengo malas intensiones. Levanto mis ojos al cielo, preguntando; &nbsp;-¿Que he hecho? ¿Que he dicho? ¿Por qué este castigo?.&nbsp;</p>
<p>Mientras busco en mi mente un motivo sólo encuentro silencio, mis recuerdos son incapaces de darme una respuesta. Una arcada, el vómito que demuestra que en mi estomago solo quedaba agua, la misma que acabo de beber y que mi cuerpo se empeña en expulsar como veneno mortal. Ahora un sudor frío me recorre la espalda, recuesto mi cabeza sobre la almohada de mi brazo mientras me siento desfallecer.</p>
<p>Me resigno, no puedo hacer nada para calmar mi sufrimiento, solo esperar el fin de mi tormento.</p>
<p>Poco a poco, mientras permanezco inmóvil, una revelación viene a mi mente, el germen de una idea toma forma y me susurra “es tu culpa”. Ahora por fin entiendo, el único culpable de esta desgracia soy yo, con solo respetar aquella frase tantas veces repetidas me habría liberado de este veneno que hoy corre por mis venas, de esta inmensa agonía. La sentencia, una promesa simple en apariencia, pero tan difícil de mantener.</p>
<p><img src="http://tsminteractive.com/files/2013/05/bottle-of-poison.jpg"/></p>
<p>“No volveré a beber”</p>
<p><br></p>
<p>Escrito por Jesús Calero</p>
<p><br></p>
<p><a href="http://tsminteractive.com/chinese-students-killed-by-rat-poison/">Fuente Imagen</a></p>
</html>
👍  , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
properties (23)
post_id23,735,728
authorjcalero
permlinkculpa
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "format": "html", "links": ["http://tsminteractive.com/chinese-students-killed-by-rat-poison/"], "image": ["http://tsminteractive.com/files/2013/05/bottle-of-poison.jpg"], "tags": ["spanish", "cervantes", "cervantes-literatura", "espanol", "minicuento"]}"
created2018-01-05 12:35:30
last_update2018-01-05 13:55:39
depth0
children21
net_rshares1,283,084,085,351
last_payout2018-01-12 12:35:30
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value9.679 SBD
curator_payout_value2.862 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length2,247
author_reputation4,559,202,571,190
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (56)
@jerrybanfield ·
re-jcalero-culpa-20180105t132315271z
Thank you @jcalero for promoting this post together with https://steemit.com/budget/@jerrybanfield/introducing-steem-budget-proposals
properties (22)
post_id23,743,903
authorjerrybanfield
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180105t132315271z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "postpromoter/1.6.0"}"
created2018-01-05 13:23:15
last_update2018-01-05 13:23:15
depth1
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-12 13:23:15
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length133
author_reputation358,463,090,245,284
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@ricardo993 ·
Muy bueno ese minicuento compañero.
👍  
properties (23)
post_id23,746,842
authorricardo993
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180105t154907019z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-05 13:39:36
last_update2018-01-05 13:39:36
depth1
children1
net_rshares670,293,766
last_payout2018-01-12 13:39:36
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length35
author_reputation5,467,361,343,140
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@jcalero ·
Gracias, me alegra te haya entretenido 👍
properties (22)
post_id24,278,141
authorjcalero
permlinkre-ricardo993-re-jcalero-culpa-20180108t032044405z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-08 03:20:51
last_update2018-01-08 03:20:51
depth2
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-15 03:20:51
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length40
author_reputation4,559,202,571,190
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@kruznik ·
Super fatalista @jcalero, me siento identificado de cierta manera porque a veces ni me quiero levantar de la cama después de una larga noche debido a que para mi mala suerte, mi memoria conserva todos los recuerdos y los "flashbacks" de la estúpida noche anterior.
👍  
properties (23)
post_id23,811,632
authorkruznik
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180105t200426433z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "users": ["jcalero"], "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-05 20:04:33
last_update2018-01-05 20:04:33
depth1
children0
net_rshares684,185,865
last_payout2018-01-12 20:04:33
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length264
author_reputation3,051,015,713,993
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@pushup ·
<p>2.32% @pushup from @jcalero</p>
properties (22)
post_id23,836,003
authorpushup
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180105t225449171z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "drotto/0.0.3rc3", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-05 22:54:48
last_update2018-01-05 22:54:48
depth1
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-12 22:54:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length35
author_reputation798,403,114,123
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@upyou ·
re-jcalero-culpa-20180105t225628548z
You got a 43.48% upvote from @upyou thanks to @jcalero!
properties (22)
post_id23,836,264
authorupyou
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180105t225628548z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "postpromoter/1.6.0"}"
created2018-01-05 22:56:27
last_update2018-01-05 22:56:27
depth1
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-12 22:56:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length55
author_reputation-10,128,743,088
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@booster ·
<p>This post has received a 1.16 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @jcalero.</p>
properties (22)
post_id23,854,283
authorbooster
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180106t011440527z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "drotto/0.0.3rc3", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-06 01:14:39
last_update2018-01-06 01:14:39
depth1
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-13 01:14:39
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length81
author_reputation68,830,001,303,403
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@carlferr ·
Que dramatica manera de describir una resaca. Like
👍  
properties (23)
post_id23,983,556
authorcarlferr
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180106t162015216z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-06 16:20:18
last_update2018-01-06 16:20:18
depth1
children1
net_rshares695,670,250
last_payout2018-01-13 16:20:18
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length50
author_reputation912,010,839,355
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@jcalero ·
Jajajajaja siempre pasa lo mismo, uno se arrepiente y jura no beber de nuevo hasta que le ponen una cerveza bien fría. Y vuelta a empezar...
properties (22)
post_id24,045,537
authorjcalero
permlinkre-carlferr-re-jcalero-culpa-20180106t231316744z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-06 23:13:24
last_update2018-01-06 23:13:24
depth2
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-13 23:13:24
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length140
author_reputation4,559,202,571,190
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@tanukighost ·
Que paso ayer versión super fatalista. xD
👍  
properties (23)
post_id24,010,107
authortanukighost
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180106t192702397z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-06 18:59:51
last_update2018-01-06 18:59:51
depth1
children2
net_rshares685,235,196
last_payout2018-01-13 18:59:51
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length41
author_reputation28,111,815,178
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@jcalero ·
😂 tampoco al extremo jaja
properties (22)
post_id24,045,657
authorjcalero
permlinkre-tanukighost-re-jcalero-culpa-20180106t231404620z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-06 23:14:12
last_update2018-01-06 23:14:12
depth2
children1
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-13 23:14:12
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length25
author_reputation4,559,202,571,190
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@tanukighost ·
JAJA <3
properties (22)
post_id24,377,608
authortanukighost
permlinkre-jcalero-re-tanukighost-re-jcalero-culpa-20180108t151152575z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-08 14:44:48
last_update2018-01-08 14:44:48
depth3
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-15 14:44:48
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length7
author_reputation28,111,815,178
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@renesalasvilla ·
hasta se me quitaron las ganas de tomar, solo por unos segundos jajaja. muy buen relato amigo, espero leer el tuyo en el concurso de @trenz esta semana
👍  
properties (23)
post_id24,201,923
authorrenesalasvilla
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180107t181424125z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "users": ["trenz"], "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-07 18:14:27
last_update2018-01-07 18:14:27
depth1
children1
net_rshares602,205,016
last_payout2018-01-14 18:14:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length151
author_reputation33,711,476,775
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@jcalero ·
Gracias, ya el del concurso está publicado, a ver como me va esta semana xD
properties (22)
post_id24,245,353
authorjcalero
permlinkre-renesalasvilla-re-jcalero-culpa-20180107t232117222z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-07 23:22:18
last_update2018-01-07 23:22:18
depth2
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-14 23:22:18
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length75
author_reputation4,559,202,571,190
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@mllg · (edited)
Tan bueno con dramático.
Ëxito  y muchos más votos
👍  ,
properties (23)
post_id24,216,820
authormllg
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180107t200957766z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-07 19:52:45
last_update2018-01-08 04:17:00
depth1
children1
net_rshares667,922,103
last_payout2018-01-14 19:52:45
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length50
author_reputation38,213,975,622,361
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (2)
@jcalero ·
Gracias!
properties (22)
post_id24,284,490
authorjcalero
permlinkre-mllg-re-jcalero-culpa-20180108t040847350z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-08 04:08:54
last_update2018-01-08 04:08:54
depth2
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-15 04:08:54
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length8
author_reputation4,559,202,571,190
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@pepiflowers ·
que mala es la resaca!

Pero muy buena forma de relatar, me gusta!
Tienes una nueva seguidora amigo!
👍  
properties (23)
post_id24,232,143
authorpepiflowers
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180107t214128386z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-07 21:41:24
last_update2018-01-07 21:41:24
depth1
children1
net_rshares654,007,060
last_payout2018-01-14 21:41:24
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length100
author_reputation29,436,684,211,147
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (1)
@jcalero ·
Gracias! Me alegra que te gustara, espero no te aburras de mis chistes pronto! Cualquier comentario sincero es bienvenido. 👊
properties (22)
post_id24,281,670
authorjcalero
permlinkre-pepiflowers-re-jcalero-culpa-20180108t034632663z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-08 03:46:39
last_update2018-01-08 03:46:39
depth2
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-15 03:46:39
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length124
author_reputation4,559,202,571,190
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@sneaky-ninja ·
re-jcalero-culpa-20180110t232725742z
Sneaky Ninja Attack! You have been defended with a 0.99% vote... I was summoned by @jcalero! I have done their bidding and now I will vanish...Whoosh
properties (22)
post_id24,890,470
authorsneaky-ninja
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180110t232725742z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "postpromoter/1.7.3"}"
created2018-01-10 23:27:27
last_update2018-01-10 23:27:27
depth1
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-17 23:27:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length149
author_reputation6,936,032,367,043
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
@siulgerardo1980 ·
Diossss que talento te sugiero que escribas escribas mucho tienes mucho potencial y una imaginación brillante te felicit. tienes mi voto
👍  ,
properties (23)
post_id25,028,121
authorsiulgerardo1980
permlinkre-jcalero-culpa-20180111t144852536z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-11 14:48:51
last_update2018-01-11 14:48:51
depth1
children1
net_rshares1,067,100,876
last_payout2018-01-18 14:48:51
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length136
author_reputation0
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000
author_curate_reward""
vote details (2)
@jcalero ·
Gracias, aunque creo que exageras xD
properties (22)
post_id25,030,375
authorjcalero
permlinkre-siulgerardo1980-re-jcalero-culpa-20180111t150027462z
categoryspanish
json_metadata"{"app": "steemit/0.1", "tags": ["spanish"]}"
created2018-01-11 15:00:27
last_update2018-01-11 15:00:27
depth2
children0
net_rshares0
last_payout2018-01-18 15:00:27
cashout_time1969-12-31 23:59:59
total_payout_value0.000 SBD
curator_payout_value0.000 SBD
pending_payout_value0.000 SBD
promoted0.000 SBD
body_length36
author_reputation4,559,202,571,190
root_titleCulpa
beneficiaries[]
max_accepted_payout1,000,000.000 SBD
percent_steem_dollars10,000