<html> <p><center><strong>#shortstory</strong></center></p> <p><img src="https://pixabay.com/get/e835b9092bfd023ed1534705fb0938c9bd22ffd41cb111429df5c770ae/waiting-1086393_1920.jpg" width="1920" height="1271"/></p> <p><br></p> <p>Then, I answered. "Will you? Is that what you want? You can't try once again? Don't you see the sincerity of me? Is it time for me to give up?" My tears fell slowly.</p> <p><br></p> <p>He came to me, then he wipe my tears. He held my hand, and hug me tight. Oh my God. I was getting hurt more. My sincerity slowly faded, when I knew it was never be a beautiful love story. I took my last change to feel the warmth of his compassion. And he said in my arms, "<em>I can't, darling</em>."</p> <p><br></p> <p>He hurried away with the tears in his eyes. And he left a million of sweet yet painful memories. Then, rain fell in a beauty dusk.</p> <p><br></p> <p><img src="https://pixabay.com/get/eb34b2072df7053ed1534705fb0938c9bd22ffd41cb111429df5c57fa5/woman-2138534_1920.jpg" width="1920" height="1336"/></p> <p><br></p> <blockquote>Final Decision</blockquote> <p><br></p> <p><em>You're all that I want</em></p> <p><br></p> <p><em>Smiled to me</em></p> <p><em>Loved me</em></p> <p><em>Took care of me</em></p> <p><em>No one compared</em></p> <p><br></p> <p><em>It's just a compassion</em></p> <p><em>But, I loved it</em></p> <p><em>When you pretended</em></p> <p><em>To loved me</em></p> <p><br></p> <p><em>Darling</em></p> <p><em>Thank you so much</em></p> <p><br></p> <p><em>I loved you with all my heart</em></p> <p><em>Be happier after this difficult way</em></p> <p><br></p> <p><em>Let us remove all the pain in peace...</em></p> <p><br></p> <p><em>With love,</em></p> <p><br></p> <p><em>Your true admirer</em></p> <p></p> <p><div class="pull-right"><em><strong>*the end*</strong></em></div></p> <p><br><br></p> <center><code>Thank you dearest Steemians. Your upvote is appreciated! Don't forget to follow @poetry-vibes :)</code></center> <br><p><sub>Image : <a href="pixabay.com">Source</a></sub></p> </html>
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Wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much. I will share another and hope you can anjoy it every day :)
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That's beautiful. It's so hard to end a relationship that isn't working. It takes bravery to walk away. Thanks for posting.
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Yes, it's hard to make an unfair decision. But it was a must that must happened. Your welcome 😊
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