This is lovely and deep!

I’m the poem, you portrayed life stages and life as an experiment, each stage has it’s positive and negative experiences, but the amazing thing is that time never wait for all the amendments and all the experiments, what an ironic life!

Thanks for sharing @terrycraft.
Compliment of the season.

I am still your humble friend and follower @maxdevalue. I never regretted following you on steemit. Thank you.

I really like the quality that the frequent ellipsis provides. I love ellipses, but I don't think I've ever tried to use them in a poem. It makes it seem like there's so much more going on between the words. 

Thanks for sharing, Terry! Time most certainly doesn't wait.

Very interesting poem I love it out speaks from within you and that's very cool 😊 merry Christmas Terry!! To you and your family❤️

Nice piece. You've taken time to go through the facets of life. This is revealing. Keep it up

Nice poetry, carrying a very important message in it that we should keep an eye that how we are spending our time. Time should be respected because once its gone it never comes back. So spend quality time... Beautiful post.

This poem almost made me tear up.

While we are young time is on our side, while we move on in life it seems that also the times speeds up and we start soon realizing that we are in a race for making the best of it. Nevertheless, we should treasure each moment and make it count.
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You have put the journey through life very well. Impressed!!!🤗🤗🤗

a poem to remind us, one to teach us, is always the best poem--good job!

I like this poem and how it has taken me back to the different stages in my life. Great work!

@terrycraft
simple i told awesome,

This poem is so lovely and so meaningful !!!
it remind me of a story 
There was a king, one he gave a ring to his minister and asked him to write something on it that will make me happy when in grief, and give me sadness when i am enjoying joys of life, or otherwise i would kill you if you failed in 10 days.
Minister was very confused at this and he was seeing his death clearly approaching everyday. 
At last day of deadline when he was walking with heavy feet toward king palace, he met a shepherd. shepherd asked him of his bad situation and minister told him all story. shepherd smiled and said you are worried of such easy thing just write "This time will pass too".

Words of wisdom for the younger ones. Oh, those days. Don't I remember them.

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In keeping with your theme, and with the reality of this world, neither man nor technology can sustain sophistication in the present day, but all the earthly beings will become extinct and die. while time keeps running,
By. @aguess

What a beautiful poem, i totally loved it!

Beautiful poetry ....it is really beautiful to connect with such wonderful people ... Just want to write up few lines from my side...

"We will keep chasing time , Time will slip away from us...until we touch eternity..." :-(

A poem about self discovery.
The journey to knowing,
The journey to finding oneself!

Wow. That is an Essence of life. 
Brilliant.