<center> ![](https://steemitimages.com/DQmQZ5yAmcPBYKY214nuDjo6wa9Zgi8dL8XKiF1SdwLoCem/image.png) **Mark the countdown** Check the list The face, the race the way that she moves Excitement for the prospective but Unknown Next to the boredom of safety and security Swap for the boredom of the upgradeable Enhancement? Enchantment? Box full of choke-on chocolates Invited to a celebratory feast Being all for the privilege of my belly Of which I keep a close watch And of this heart of mine Of this dick of mine Of this pinged and binged soul of mine Separation and alienation Deformation of a body of evidence Substitution with a preferential specimen Interlocutor Defiler of lust, trust and a pertaining list of Must She knows And she does too And I just play the fool Smile and wave **Curb feel and curl feel my goodbyes** --- ![BottomFeeder.png](https://steemitimages.com/DQmRhP61T3FnAGdDiWvXWhhAevhFHTM2NPWVZBaRv8mA47i/BottomFeeder.png) --- </center>
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The games we play with each other... weird dances that sometimes seem instinctual and uncontrollable, in spite of all of the modern day bells and whistles... As this poem reverberates in my mind I'm thinking of Perfect Circle's song Magdalena, where the man sings about the magnetic power of a stripper he can't tear his eyes from. Beautifully written, a lot of memorable lines in here. "box full of choke-on chocolates", "pinged and dinged soul of mine"... Really well written. Following :)
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Mer de Noms is a very good record. I appreciate the deep emotional states it, can when studied in approximation, induce. Hadn't heard of Magdalena for quite some time, enjoyed listening to it again! Thank you for the comments, friend. One thing I can assure you is that we are the creators and facilitators of happenings.
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yeh that's one of my faves. the lyrics in "Hollow" are freaking brilliant. Really enjoying reading your work. Here are a few links to poems and songs I've posted, if you'd like to check any of it out: https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/capitulation-a-poem-by-bennettitalia https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/honesty-a-poem-by-bennettitalia https://steemit.com/openmic/@bennettitalia/open-mic-week-67-tangled-an-original-song-by-bennettitalia https://steemit.com/openmic/@bennettitalia/openmic-songwriters-challenge-week-7-in-the-right-place-by-bennettitalia
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While I don't understand it all it's very intriguing. I'm only very new to poetry but stumbling upon poems like this has made me inspired to write my own very first poem! Have a look [here if you like.](https://steemit.com/poetry/@spaceginger/the-greatest-currency-of-all) 🤗🤗
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As you, in your own work and words, attempt to describe the abstract *through* abstractions, so (the) I does. Thank you, friend.
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