Excellent story, @greenrun. The beginning is a wonder and the end is a jewel, especially because the reader does not anticipate anything of what is going to happen. Although there are fantastic elements in a raw, real story, you knew how to turn it around to build an extraordinary ending. The reader assumes his solidarity with the indigent, identifies with him, feels his sorrow, his sadness. This is one of those stories that you finish reading, but we keep thinking about them: what really happened, did the homeless person die, did he manage to meet his family? This open ending opens up a range of possibilities! I want to think that somewhere he managed to meet his daughters and his wife, even if it was in heaven. Applause for you and @adsactly for sharing such great texts.