Maybe, you should give him a face, and put the pigeon and the light in his chest instead?....or maybe it will just look like a tired youth at a festival, taking a rest while his fan t-shirt is patying on.

I like it as it is, strange, and although there is some depth between the pigeon and the man, the light gives the feel of no depth. So the 3 are at the same place at the same time. 

I also like his hesitation, he is sitting there waiting...a bit introvert?

But I,m disappointed!! at first I was fascinated by the tiny hands coming out of his Cathullean beard, but then I read your txt :-)