RE: ESTEEM8 - Presentation video by cryptoctopus

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esteem8 · @cryptoctopus · Apr 25 '17

I am a big fan of your pursuit to create an alternative to steemit.com but I am going to be brutally honest about my impression of this video so that it may help with your crowdfunding.

1. You didn't grab me within the first 5-10 seconds. A simple question would do the trick. Something like: "What if we could re-invent social media?" Your goal is to get people curious about your offer as early as possible in the video.

2. It took almost a minute for you to get to your unique selling proposition. That's way way way too long. 

3. Work on your copy, take a Udemy course if you need to, because it sucks.  (the video and the music is pretty good though").

👍 edje, trueliberty, eliyahu

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@edje · Apr 25 '17

Point 1 & 2: Fully Agree.
Point 3: kind of harsh statement, but this references to point 1 and 2.

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@cryptoctopus · Apr 25 '17

yes, I agree.

👍 edje

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@esteem8 · Apr 25 '17 (edited)

$0.56

Thanks for feedback, we'll shorten the video, and make the beginin more attractive.

👍 cryptoctopus

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@cryptoctopus · Apr 25 '17

Looking forward to it. Again, I'm cheering you on even if my comment seems a bit harsh. It's only because I care. :-)

👍 immarojas

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@esteem8 · Apr 25 '17

We prefer constructive feedback, that make things moving forward.

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@giantbear · Apr 26 '17

I found the music a bit boring.  Just too much of the same thing...and I agree the video should be shortened.

👍 eliyahu

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