RE: This challenge just got a whole lot harder... by cryptosharon

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· @cryptosharon ·
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I want to go to France so badly! But I feel like I won't earn any money there, as I don't have a uni degree yet and don't even have a work visa. I'd have to go illegally and find informal jobs, and probably wouldn't be able to travel and would have to spend a lot of time earning meagerly just to make ends meet.

And I tried to go vegan once. Or, I mean, I tried to have a vegan lunch. I made pasta with tomato sauce, but it ended being so bland that I struggled to finish eating it (and I'm not picky at all).

That day was pretty memorable. I cooked it all, put it in a Tupperware, went to the uni and there was some kind of vegan meeting. That's why I did it. I joined them, talked with them and had a lot of fun, played a few games, read poetry with another girl who had a poem book in English, I think it was Poe... and then I ate my insipid pasta with tomato, lol.

I've never tried again, but I did go to a vegan household and ate with them for the most part, and they had some delicious vegan meals.

As for feedback, I think that you should divide your text into shorter paragraphs and subtitled sections to help the readers navigate your post. Even though you write pretty well and the topic is interesting, I found myself getting lost at times, especially in the first super long paragraph that could be divided.
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@itinerantartist ·
france is lovely but i must say its quite expensive to travel around. ive avoided train entirely because theyre very expensive, and even driving we thought would save money but the cost of fuel (and TOLLS!) has been way more than expected. im only on this trip because i needed to see my really good peruvian friend - but otherwise, not a very budget friendly trip. we've been camping and even then the campsites cost 20 euros a night (we've been splitting all the costs between 3, but with food, fuel, tolls, and camp fees - its been a lottt. im happy to share tips anytime tho! youll make it some day :) but yea, i think it most places like france, italy, germany, UK, its hard for anyone to survive long without looking for work. you can always find options like couchsurfing (which is something i normally do), and that always helps !
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