Hello @joelmaxwell,
Thank you for taking interest in this class. Your grades are as follows:

Criteria|Calculation
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Presentation/Use of Markdowns| 1.5/2
Compliance with Topic| 1.5/2
Quality of Analysis & Calculations | 1/2
Clarity of Language| 1.5/2
Originality & Expression| 1.5/2
***Total***| ***7/10***

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##### The following caught my attention:
> it will aids in reducing the way in which individuals spend their funds due to the fact that the will be a central authority(third party) involvement which will be monitoring individual transaction.

I don't think this would be the case.

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##### Feedback and Suggestions
* You should improve on your arrangement. Always give a space between your paragraphs.

* You should improve on your writing style and grammar.

* Questions 1 and 2 need some work.

* Your explanation and illustration in question 3 need to be improved.

* You did not state what else was on the page in question 4.

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Thanks again as we anticipate your participation in the next class.