Dance of the Siren (Original Orchestral Composition)(Draft 1) by cmp2020

music · @cmp2020 · Jul 6 '18 (edited)

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Dance of the Siren (Original Orchestral Composition)(Draft 1)

Hello everyone! I just finished the first draft of an orchestral composition that I started yesterday. I wrote the melody for the "A section (or minuet)" of this piece last year for piano. Yesterday, I saw it while scrolling through my drafts, I realized that it might be cool as a piece for orchestra. I finished the first draft today. So, let's get into the details of the piece.

### Details and Piece
I thought of the title "Dance of the Siren" last year because it sounds like a sailing piece as well as a scherzo. Because of the title, I decided that it would be cool to structure it as a Minuet (d minor) and Trio (D Major) (and a recapitulation of the Minuet), so I did. I decided to think of the minuet as the Siren's celebratory dance, and the Trio as its luring Song. Anyway, here is the first draft of "Dance of the Siren."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e3zNIMNjaGo

Thanks for reading/listening to this! I should have a weekly7 out today as well. Please remember that feedback is always appreciated! Have a nice day!

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@abdulmanan · Jul 5 '18

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Amazing brother, you have done a great job!
It's so peaceful to listen.

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@hansenatortravel · Jul 5 '18 (edited)

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Love the pp to ff. Haha. I kind of miss playing trumpet. If I got back into it I would probably practice more jazz than classical. Not that I don't like it, just for popularity in-town. Very good music. Cheers!

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@joagawu · Jul 5 '18

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Wow ! 
This is amazing ....The music is awesome
Nice one @cmp2020

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@askeb · Jul 5 '18

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Nice one! Certainly has some Eastern European influences, good job! The C natural on page 2 caught me by surprise

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@lostsound · Jul 5 '18

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I loved it!. Sorry if it's badly translated, I've been learning English for a short time.
Finding works like these is very rewarding, and thinking that it is still a draft. I look forward to the following drafts or the entire work if possible :)

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@tin-tin · Jul 8 '18

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It's an interesting piece! The luring part surprised me though, since a lot of music depics sirens luring as seductive but you went for something else :)

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@c-squared · Jul 9 '18

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