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All the emotion in this article came from the pictures. You probably spent longer choosing the pictures than writing the poem. This critique is blunt but as you didn't pour your soul into your work, it shouldn't hurt at all.
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Cathi, thanks for the critique, its much appriciated! Usualy it takes me hours to chose pictures, for this it was quite quick, as its fairly easy. The poem is written on the illustraions to Dante's inferno (not to the inferno itself) It was written over a couple of days i guess
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Now I feel like I was mean to you :)
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