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This a beautifully descriptive poem, a great example of the rule of showing the reader the story instead of telling the story. I love that you not only mentioned certain moments long gone but you put us the reader in that moment with the details, I could smell the alcohol inside and the fungi outside, I could hear the jazz and a woman screaming, I could also feel the frigid cold. And I could see the beauty of the countryside that did not fade through time, but instead changed its clothes from season to season. Thank you @d-pend for this experience. I love it.
post_id | 6,505,524 |
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author | rensoul17 |
permlink | re-d-pend-leaving-home-original-poem-entry-for-steemit-slam-1-20170708t030414089z |
category | poetry |
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created | 2017-07-08 03:04:12 |
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root_title | ""Leaving Home"--- Original Poem --- Entry For Steemit Slam #1" |
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