RE: On the wing by warpedpoetic

poetry · @warpedpoetic · Aug 2 '18

$0.05

I loved these lines;
>Through the gaps in pavement walked
Where once the flowers grew
and over ice cream we talked.

It paints a picture of something without romance then the line of you guys talking over ice-cream brings the romance back. Basically something like love in the time of cholera or in love and war or something similar.  It is beautiful anyway. 

I love the spontaneous nature of the poem and the fact that you didn't edit much of structure and grammar. It gives it a realistic and urgent feel.

👍 tarazkp

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