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As just a reader, not a fiction writer, here's my take: I liked the preamble. When published, it could be a foreword or something. The one thing I missed from it was a link into the story. Or maybe it could be in the style of a quote from some expert's book? I didn't mind that we don't know what species Gideon and Celtica are yet. That just added to the suspense for me. Though I'm picking that neither of them are vamps, you're more subtle than that. So I'm not worried about it being "just another vamp story". ;-) Though even if it was, I'm hooked now... BTW, another thing I've meant to say to you for a while. From my response to your black eyed children story, you might gather I don't like horror stories. And that's true. To me, the majority of your stories are not horror. They are interesting stories with well defined characters, and I don't read them to get scared. Just sayin'...
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You're always so insightful when you comment on my work and I always appreciate the comments. Thank you <3 I really do think I have to get back to this one. The problem was that I had far too much material for it and it went and took a life of its own and got too big for me to handle, so I put it in a box and hoped it would calm down. It hasn't calmed down so I'm going to have to take it out and rip it apart and pull it into more manageable chunks. That'll larn it ;)
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Either that'll larn it, or it'll larn you. I await the result with interest ;-)
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Hmm... yes, that's how it usually works... someone gets a larnin ;) I too, await the results with interest. My characters are all so... characterful ;)
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