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Dialogue tags and I have a difficult relationship. Avoiding them in the manner you describe can break pacing. Yet, that endless stream of boring tags otherwise distracts. Avoiding tags and descriptions altogether in two-person dialogue assumes the reader doesn't get lost. I know I do. It's all frustrating. I avoid dialogue except when needed. I prefer to attempt to describe the essence of a dialogue, rather than to state it. Then again, there's the "show don't tell" rule, which this tactic threatens to violate. This usually means I mix the two. There's some talking, then a description of why characaters take the positions they do, and then do some dialogue of the resolution. With dialogue, often less is more. Thanks for this post. I am clearly not alone in my suffering.
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Exactly. Although I'd like to add, that less is more most often, not only with dialogue. *Could write several more paragraphs to show how much I agree... but, well. Less is more.*
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Well... Less is more is pretty much my motto. But we have to be careful to not allow dialogues to take place in a dark void. When we talk, there is so much more communicated than just words... Non-verbal communication is a big part of every exchange. That might be lost if we stick too closely to the less is more rule.
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Beats and action can bog down a piece of dialogue, that's true. But they don't have to. It's all about getting the dosage just right. It's a matter of practice. But I see you've found us at The Writers' Block. You'll find plenty of help there. ;-) Welcome to the family.
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