RE: Burnt... A Fireman's Tale by seesladen

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· @seesladen ·
I just found out we went almost the same way again. A poem and a short prose this time. Only yours was more g-rated than mine. Lol


> This is such a good creepy poem, totally works as a story

I managed to get a look at my replies, and I saw this earlier. I only didn't know it was not all of it. Reading from the story page, It now feels like I am reading your comment for the first time and I sure am pleased it turned out this way.

Sometime ago I watched a movie where a man had a case of multiple personalities. But for whatever reason I can't remember the name of bthe movie. He kept repeating the first line of the Antigonish poem in that movie.

> Yesterday on the stair,
I met a man who wasn't there,
He wasn't there again today,
I wish, I wish, that he'd go away...

So it just stuck with me, and I think it has been the primary influence on my last two 24hour stories. Lol...

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@calluna ·
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Oh that old collective subconscious, up to its usual tricks ;) I am super glad these sort of story poems are ok, I used to love writing them! Woo, go collective minds, got a good bit of balance between us lol

It has such a creepy hook, the more you hear it, the more it catches, I can see how it would easily get up the skin, and of course, what better to use to inspire horror than that! If you remember the movie, let me know!
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@seesladen ·
> Woo, go collective minds, got a good bit of balance between us lol

🕺

>  If you remember the movie, let me know

Will do.😎
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