Thank you!

Yeah.  I was lucky on the Curie vote...

I've already explained to another friend my motivations in slicing the prompt.  So I will just copy my explanation below. )))

I'm generally is too lazy to rearrange the prompt just for the fun of it and do it only for a reason of big gravity. In this case, the character hook - that is the mentioning that Clara had some "expectations" about visiting the manor - was at the end of the second paragraph and that's where I started to develop the narrative using that hook. The remaining purely situational piece of prompt I put where it was most appropriate. :)  

Cheers!