RE: The bedbug (An original short story) Part 1 of 2 by mgaft1

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· @mgaft1 ·
I guess this was a boring story. So much work and for nothing. :)

I wonder what is your opinion about this story?  https://steemit.com/fiction/@mgaft1/christmas-balls-an-original-short-story

In my opinion, it's a really silly one.  I even had doubts about posting it at a time.  Surprisingly, I've got a lot of responses and was gotten paid a lot.  But I don't understand why?
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@deirdyweirdy ·
As I recall we discussed this some time back and compared it with another story you'd written which didn't earn so well. It's impossible to tell why one post is successful and the other isn't. There are so many variables, many of which don't reflect upon the quality of the post at all. At the risk of sounding obsequious, I have no idea why you don't get more support. I find most of your stuff entertaining and you have a very wry sense of humour which can be hilarious.
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@mgaft1 ·
Sorry.  I forgot.  A lack of memory is the other one of my falts.  :)  

Wow! What do you know?  I've got a Madame Curie!   And they claim this lovely lady died from taking too much radioactivity.   You must be her next incarnation! :)
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@deirdyweirdy ·
That's great. I'm delighted for you. Have you been praying to Metatron and Raduriel?
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@dannyiwest ·
Very entertaining Michael! I sense Greg is toying with the “grass is greener on the other side” and the struggle of accepting “it is what it is.” He can’t help himself with the notion of  “what if” and “why me.” As if the gods are playing with him, to tease him. He appears to lack gumption and fortitude, confidence in his own decisions and hopelessly entertains himself with a magic prayer book; his only ticket to escape his life sucking wife in the prison he made for himself. He is too weak to take control and make a change...it would be interesting if one of the prayers gave him the power to loose the self pity and regret and miraculously make the best of what is rather than what if. Then maybe his wife might see him in a new light, a life with her he has only been able to fantasize about🤔
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@mgaft1 · (edited)
Thank Danny! 

Yeah, you are right.   I came across a page where I saw many angel names and thought of this plot to utilize them.

Did you read part 2?
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