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ohhhh no... giggling... now I worry! She is a novice, though; today's equivalent of a 12-yr-old, so precocious they are these days, sexually... I'm afraid to go back and re-read this now... if it's too clinical, too graphic, SAY SO, and I will go back to my old 19thC subtlety and indirection! LESS IS MORE!!!! Thanks for slogging through this.
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No, no. Nothing wrong with it! Except in this bit: <blockquote>By now a distraught but sedated *Reginald* had been situated at Helga’s camp. He lay sound asleep in a tent while Stangler and the two women held bratwurst on sticks, one in each hand, over a fire.</blockquote> I think that's supposed to be Archibald. :) <br><br> My giggling is reserved for when I'm writing sordid affairs. I'm terrible and can't help it, easily embarrassed by my own words. And I did not slog! I read quite readily. ;) <br><br> It's not too clinical or too graphic or too anything! I think it's just right.
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Ahh, thank you for the catch - I've fixed it in the manuscript. And added a few paragraphs of Helga and her pagan rituals. Today, wc = 1877, so far. But I'm still under 40,000 and only a few days to go to hit 50,000! Squeeeeeeee!
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