RE: Lady Graves, Day 27-ish- p.m. - prompt: rose petals -NaNoWriMo 2018 - freewritemadness by kaelci

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· @kaelci ·
No, no. Nothing wrong with it! Except in this bit:
<blockquote>By now a distraught but sedated *Reginald* had been situated at Helga’s camp. He lay sound asleep in a tent while Stangler and the two women held bratwurst on sticks, one in each hand, over a fire.</blockquote>
I think that's supposed to be Archibald. :)
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My giggling is reserved for when I'm writing sordid affairs. I'm terrible and can't help it, easily embarrassed by my own words. And I did not slog! I read quite readily. ;)
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It's not too clinical or too graphic or too anything! I think it's just right.
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@carolkean ·
Ahh, thank you for the catch - I've fixed it in the manuscript. And added a few paragraphs of Helga and her pagan rituals. Today, wc = 1877, so far. But I'm still under 40,000 and only a few days to go to hit 50,000!
Squeeeeeeee!
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